It was cute, but I wasn't satisfied. It wasn't even close to my satisfaction. Sigh, I don't know I wish it would go further in depth with their before and after and how Wan feel suddenly losing his mother and having thoughts about Yuki being the 'mother'. I guess, haha.

liked it but it was a little sad. loved the ending thought that they would leave Yuki again, and if that was true i would have to ask for a sequel but it didnt so good ending.

I've just finished to read your story and after I write this review I'm going to read the sequel.

I love this story, so good to see them as a family. Wan is an adorable little "brat" :D

I could imagine Yuki to cut himself, it is so "yukish" to finf this kind of escape.

I was happy to read about a matured Shuichi. But to take a flight to India... I hoped Yuki will go wwith them. So I am not able to wait any longer so I jump to read the sequel! Good writing, thank you for sharing it with us!

heyy love it

Nice, i love it, it's something that someone can read and easily fall in love with.

This story is great. It has a lot of up's and downs but it flows perfectly. I loved it!

Sorry not to review every chapter - if I did I'd never catch up! There are of course a lot of Shuichi and Eiri break up fics and most of them don't work for me, but I liked where you took the characters. It seemed to me that Shuichi had grown up a lot by the end of the anime and that he really would have walked out and not come back if Eiri had treated him that badly, or more to the point, had told him at that late date that he didn't love him.

My only problem, I admit, was the cutting - not the subject itself but the idea of a grown man doing it. I'm sure it happens but I do think it tends to be the tendency of teenage girls. Men find plenty of other ways to abuse themselves, alcohol and violence (i.e. getting into fights) being the most obvious! But that is only a small complaint and only my opinion, and it didn't really do any harm to the story. I did like the general idea of what Eiri was like when he was depressed; the messy flat and the equally messy man - all of that really seemed to describe depression.

I loved your more mature Shuichi - I suppose he's out of character for the boy in them anime but he wouldn't be a boy by the time he has got to the point in your story. His role as a father was so believable. I also liked the idea of him just ending up with a woman and getting married - he's so often paired with Ryuichi or other boys or men, but I somehow don't see him as fundamentally gay, just as someone who fell head over heels in love with Eiri Yuki, and the feeling I got with his wife was that he just met someone who was kind and loving which was what he needed at the time.

And I liked Wan too - I thought he was a cute but realistic little boy and his relationship with Yuki was so sweet. I also liked the fair way you treated the other characters, especially the Tohma / Mika and Hiro / Ayaka relationships which so often get a beating! If anything I would have liked to know more about them a few years on and what would happen when Bad Luck reformed. I was sorry you didn't spend more time on that towards the end, but I hope you will continue - you asked if we'd like to see Wan as a teenager, but I'd actually like to see all of them just a little further ahead of where you left them!

i really enjoyed the fanfic. it was really good.

i want the lemons please send them to me. )

syd

oh that was just too cute! i loved it all!

much love always

hope x

Awsome job!..Please leave my socks be O_O

Finlly finished reading it. Awesome!

AH! LOVE THE ENDING! GOING 2 GO READ THE SEQUEL!

how cute

This is s sweet, and i love how yuki seems to love wan