'the days of the Phantoms have just begun' means that there's a sequel, right? RIGHT!?

Nice...

wow. my friend Samantha Seldowits (that's her penname) reccomended this story to me, and i didn't expect anything. i thought it was just a normal Danny's-kids-discover-they-have-ghost-powers fic, but i was wrong. it was absolutely amazing! Congrats on having by far the best futuristic fic, and i look forward to reading more of your work!

~Emily

Awesome story!

I just spent hours reading this thing, and it's totally awesome! It went in a completely different direction than most future DP stories do, and that's great. I love what you did with it.

And most amazingly, you managed to make a future fic without mentioning Dan a SINGLE time. Most people don't do that, lol. xD

Great story though! 5 thumbs up. xD

...Ok. 5 stars, or 2 thumbs up. Or 5 thumbs up. Whatever. :)

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!

*hypervetilate*

okay... settle down...

I like the history, it's really well written. *nods profusely*

you cant use html or whatever the i /i things are. it doesn't work on you have to just use ctrli and stuff like you normally would. Just something i thought i would point out, since it makes several parts in your stories have errors.

TTYL,

Adran

OK, I wouldn't be reviewing normally, but I just have to say that I can barely understand half of what is happening. The stuff I can understand is good, but otherwise it's kind of frustrating trying to understand what is happening. Like for instance: She couldn’t exactly find the words to describe the situation. The situation that rendered her helpless with conundrum over the effects of this recent turn of events.

Huh? I cant understand the second sentence at all. It's kind of hard to get into a story when it has things that I can barely understand. Another part that was REALLY hard to understand is what I am assuming is Vlad's escape. At least, it seems like Vlad is being released. I'm not even sure of that much, but I think that part is intended. Most of that entire section is very hard to understand. You might want to work on making things more understandable. Other than these problems though, your story is pretty good.

TTYL,

Adran

LOL When Ellie said "you don't know the half of it" I started giggling like crazy at the irony.

Great story! Will there be a sequel?

This is a really good "future phantom" story. So good, in fact, that I have added it to the C2 community for stories about Danny Phantom in the future with kids (lol).

Anyways it seems like it will be really interesting so I'll keep reading and I hope you take the time to check out the stories in the c2 community.

Seriously,

Samurai Sirius

OMG please tell me ur gonna make a sequel? please? I love ur story and i want more!

I love the ending!

good ending. I like your story as a whole but towards the middle it seemed to kind of drag. For a couple of chapters it just didn't seem like you wre taking it anywhre. You definatly got over that and this ending was great. I like the reveals of Danny to the kids and Jake and Ellie to their parents. You didn't go over the top with it. Good job.

Like I told you on DeviantArt: I really like your writing style. The characters you've created (Ellie, Jake, their friends, their enemies) were all perfectly defined (as in, you knew exactly what their personalities were like). You didn't jump right into the revelation of secrets which is always fun in a story. And I also have to say that it all flows in a very neat way.

Although, the only thing that has been bugging me is that the last two chapters felt kinda rushed. I mean, I did enjoy all of it, but the end seemed rather quick.

Other than that, awesome story and conclusion. You even left plenty of room for a sequel (which, by the way, are you planning on writing?).

Anyway, take care and I hope to read more of your stories in the near future.

Wow! That was really good! Are you going to make a sequel?