I loved it...I couldn’t stop reading it

Wow. Like, really WOW. I'm speechless. This was absolutely captivating. Confusing, and yes, I did have to reread it, but it was captivating. The emotions I'm feeling right now...I honestly don't know what to say. Beautiful, heartbreaking and just so raw. Your Draco is great, as is Harry. Thanks for writing.

I really love this, although I do think in the wizarding world there may be more... efficient ways to finish yourself off... but either way this is great and really sweet.

Cute.

That was brilliant and so original!

Oh dear god. Dude *jaw drops, I get it back, but it falls again* No words can describe how beautifully amazing this story was. It was...just...too good for words. That's all I can say. I have to admit I was a bit confused as to who was narrating the story (second-person tends to do that for me) but overall it was a really good story. You did a great job

who is who?
i don't get anything that's happening.
you might want to go back and fix up your story a little bit.
and i would suggest separating the people talking, or tell us who is in the conversation that is in the story.
also who is perspective is it coming from?
i'm completely confused.
but that's it. other then that i think the story is perfectly fine, even with the occasional grammar problems.
so...ya. XD

I liked this, it was written in second person, which never really happens in fanfics (or normal literature, for that matter), apart from insert readers. And it was written really well. Good job!

honest to god, i cried. that was sooo adorable. seriously i am like still crying

Beautiful.

A typo: "Was if affection?" I believe this was meant to be something different.
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Okay.
So, I love this Draco, this Harry, this Dumbledore and Minerva and Snape and everybody, and the black eye, and the idea of a system, and everything else. And how beautiful this whole oneshot is.
The use of the bold in "Him" is gorgeous, by the way. And the use of parenthesis. That too.
This oneshot. Close to perfection, if there is any such thing.

One word: Wow. Great job on this. ;)

It's A Bit On The Dark Side But Very Well Written

It's Great And Although Harry Doesn't Think About Suicide In The Books But It Does Seem Like Something Someone In That Position Would Do
Good Job

I loved this, it was short, but incredible, thank you so much for a good story :)

Its kinda of cool to see Draco fall in love from this type of perspective. Thanks for sharing.