(sob) So beautiful!

It sucks! NO NO NO NO NOJK this rocks! i'm putting it on my faves, duh! lol you did a great job. I want to read more of your stories, hopefully they're as great as this one :)

You did really more stories like this!

So cute! I'm glad it wasn't super short, had some type of general plot, and something so innocent. And know what's weird? Lots of times when something like this happens, suddenly they're in passionate MAKE OUT and having sex the next seconds. I'm glad you drew this out some and let it stay sweet and innocent for the most part. It was a very good first. I can't want for you to get better!

:)

That was your first? Really? Well, you got talent then cause that was really really good! You have my seal of approval _

aw how cute. i liked it a lot. it was really good keep up the good work.

aww... it was so sweet! cute! fluffy! and i dont have a big vocab so thats all ill say. lol!