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nicole D chapter 1 . 2/9/2010 That was so good! you portrayed the characters very well, close to how they actually act in the manga! |
BlackButterfly1224 chapter 1 . 7/13/2009 please continue? that's all I'm going to say. |
Megan chapter 1 . 4/7/2009 Argh! I was so mad when I got to the end of oneshot. You know why? Because there was no more! I think you should keep writing. |
animefreak chapter 1 . 11/30/2008 are you update ] |
Venus Smurf chapter 1 . 5/2/2008 I wish you WOULD make this a continuing story! It was beautifully written, and it's one of the few fics capable of reminding us why this pairing works. You've captured their personalities without making him seem like a complete joke, and I'm completely enamored of you. Beautifully done! |
cityangelz chapter 1 . 1/1/2008 Haha. OMG. You probably forgot this exist. Anyway, just thought i'd drop a review letting you know that I enjoyed reading it. cheers! |
Captain Salvatore chapter 1 . 11/25/2007 omg! i luv it! e! plz update soon :D |
a thousand cranes chapter 1 . 10/1/2007 Hey I really liked your story. I think that you understood the characters well and the little ways you tweaked them added more to their relationship. keep writing! |
HeartOfRaven chapter 1 . 9/10/2007 vary hot! |
sheila chapter 1 . 8/21/2007 waaH~! pls continue this stOry~! sO nIcE~! |
ashley-chan chapter 1 . 6/3/2007 a little more sexually explicit story would be much appreciated. i think you're going the right way with this fic because although ryoki acts touch he really does love her the way you wrote it. keep up the good work :) |
Viii-sama chapter 1 . 5/3/2007 actually, ryouki's good at heart. it's just that he never shows it :) |
esther chapter 1 . 4/1/2007 wow...completely awesome. most IC ryoki and hatsumi ever. SO good, there is not enough well written ryohatsu around...PLEASE CONTINUE! |
emzzy chapter 1 . 3/3/2007 Omg! So far out of all the Hot Gimmick fan fics I have read yours is the best. I think you should make a next chapter and another one ... and another etc until you have like 100 chapters :P. |
0Aya0 chapter 1 . 12/10/2006 Theres any OOC in the characters. You described exactly how they act towards eachother. Great! |