Reviews for love in progress
nicole D chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
That was so good! you portrayed the characters very well, close to how they actually act in the manga!
BlackButterfly1224 chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
please continue? that's all I'm going to say.
Megan chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Argh! I was so mad when I got to the end of oneshot. You know why? Because there was no more! I think you should keep writing.
animefreak chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
are you update ]
Venus Smurf chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
I wish you WOULD make this a continuing story! It was beautifully written, and it's one of the few fics capable of reminding us why this pairing works. You've captured their personalities without making him seem like a complete joke, and I'm completely enamored of you. Beautifully done!
cityangelz chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Haha. OMG. You probably forgot this exist. Anyway, just thought i'd drop a review letting you know that I enjoyed reading it.

cheers!
Captain Salvatore chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
omg! i luv it! e! plz update soon :D
a thousand cranes chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
Hey I really liked your story. I think that you understood the characters well and the little ways you tweaked them added more to their relationship. keep writing!
HeartOfRaven chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
vary hot!
sheila chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
waaH~! pls continue this stOry~! sO nIcE~!
ashley-chan chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
a little more sexually explicit story would be much appreciated. i think you're going the right way with this fic because although ryoki acts touch he really does love her the way you wrote it. keep up the good work :)
Viii-sama chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
actually, ryouki's good at heart. it's just that he never shows it :)
esther chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
wow...completely awesome. most IC ryoki and hatsumi ever. SO good, there is not enough well written ryohatsu around...PLEASE CONTINUE!
emzzy chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Omg! So far out of all the Hot Gimmick fan fics I have read yours is the best. I think you should make a next chapter and another one ... and another etc until you have like 100 chapters :P.
0Aya0 chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
Theres any OOC in the characters. You described exactly how they act towards eachother. Great!
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