Excellent story, well written.

That is so cool, please continue this I love it! XD

Gosh! Really, really nice. Loved your characterisation, your humanisation, really, of the Blyton characters. Great tone, great use of language. You captured Mam'zelle down to a 'T' especially. Well done. I hope you keep writing Blytonfic.

Aw!

I love this. So very much.

I'm re-reading my way through at the moment, and I needed to find some sweet femslash, and I did.

This is very well written, perfectly in character and so very good.

Thank you for writing this.

Added to my favourites.

That was really good. You have a nice style. I don't know quite how to pinpoint it but the way you go between dialogue and description is very natural and a pleasure to read. Thank you.

I have no clue who these people are, but your writing made it not matter at all. This was amazing!

(I should probably explain myself: I clicked on "Enid Blyton" because I was bored and vaguely remembered seeing the name before, and being vaguely familar with it, but I think I was mistaken; I guess I've never read any of Enid Blyton's books. However, your fic looked interesting, so I clicked, and wow! :) Thanks for providing me with a good read in a really unexpected place!)

Oh, that's a brilliant ending. Oh my, the tension. Fabulous. Love love love it!