this was really good!

A marvelous story. I like how you were able to introduce supernarural elements in a way that didn't strain the suspension of disbelief or interfere with the sensitivity of the subject. I also enjoyed how you explored an aspect of possession that has been woefully underused. Finally you gave Odd an interesting new role that just works more than most other portrayals of him. I look forward to more stories from you.

I love this, FS. Upload more CL, please.

Wow.

Wow. This was amazingly well written, and really sad.

You should make a sequal where Odd comes back from the dead again.

that was kinda dark and morbid

freaking awsome

_ I like it!

that was a good story,

Again, awesome job. 10/10. Amazing, absolutly amazing. The amount of emotion present was just indescribable. When you come up with something, you really make it work.

Ugh, it's taken me way to long to get to reading this. But, as you know I've been busy. :( But I have a free night tonight! :) So I'm catching up on a few things. Awesome job. Two thumbs way up. You wrote this from every possible angle in Jeremie's mind nad you did an awesome job at it. Now, on to chapter 2!

Aw! I've always rather liked these kinds of moments in movies and such, where you get the see the dead person again in spirit form. It's always touching and emotional and always bittersweet angsty, because you know you really will never see them again. You wrote it so well, too.

You're right, it IS the kind of thing Odd would do. You just made it fit his character perfectly. Oh, I loved it when Jeremie finally broke down and cried! Ah, but the best line was right before Odd left: "Some guilt will always remain, Jeremie. But it doesn't have to rule you." That's so perfect, and so true!

So basically...I loved it! I'm really glad you made it into a two-parter, it works so well. Awesomeness, as always!

Oh, so angsty and dark. I loved that one line, "The burns on my hands, from XANA's power, made it easier for them to believe that I'd tried to help him." So ironic!

Definitely reading the second chapter now... C

Bravo! I loved this fanfic so much. 10 out of 10 _