Reviews for Realms
Lukkai chapter 1 . 12/3/2018
Hmm... I wonder whether you'll be able to find the time, motivation and muse to return to this and/or Progeny and Splitting Heirs (or even something from the slush files, where I'm quite partial to the Ranma stories). All three certainly are very interesting reads and have quickly caught my attention, including leading to sleepless nights due to "just one more chapter"-syndrome. ;)

I have placed you in my bookmarks and will check in regularily if possible. So long, all I can do is hope and express to you both my gratitude for what you have already written, I enjoyed it a lot. And my willingness to wait for as long as it takes you to find again the things mentioned in my first sentence. All three of which obviously being necessary to truly being able to write. Which can be difficult, seeing as there is such a thing as your life expecting your full attention.

Hope to see you writing again. Until then, so long and thank you for all the joy you delivered.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/11/2018
Well, it sucks this isn't going to be finished. On the other hand, what else is new. Scope creep indeed. Shoulda outlined the plot until the ending, burnout was inevitable. Oh well.
Calen chapter 1 . 7/5/2018
Moooo... rrrrrreeeee... Sooooooon!
nashmeira chapter 8 . 2/23/2018
Omg I'm laughing my butt off at the end of this chapter. It's great.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/14/2016
Well..
That..
..
Is one way to 'leave' a story.
Thank you for writing this.
I hope that one day you will come back to it.
However I do not hold much hope.
Yet, I thank you for this magnificent story.
Akritedes chapter 13 . 2/14/2016
On the one hand, this is interesting and relatively well done.

On the other hand, this is trying to tell at least three different stories at the same goddamned time and all of them are suffering for it because there is far, far too much leaping around and switching about for enough interest and connection to be built to any part of it.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/18/2015
What a cliffhanger! What's next? I really want updates,please.
Natalie-E-G chapter 13 . 3/1/2015
The only author I can think of that is as slow as you for updates and I believe has not abandoned their story is Mike Noakes for Choices. I am sure I started reading "Realms" and "Choices" back in the 1990's. This is at least 15 years later, maybe closer to 18. Is it any wonder I only search for an update to your story and his about once a year?

Still enjoying the story. I think I see extra material in Chapter 13 since you last published on the Lost Library of Flores something (I just found you on 3 days ago). Also did you combine chapters from back then.

Hoping for an new update soon from both you and Noakes.
kittle-uk chapter 13 . 2/4/2015
Just finished reading through the fic. I really enjoyed it and hope it's continued eventually. Not in a "You must write!" way, just a "That was fun and would love to read more." I know all about life getting in the way of the stuff you enjoy. This is just letting you know that you're still making people happy.
Spica75 chapter 13 . 11/10/2014
Very novel and really awesome story.

Hope you continue it as soon as you can.
lordamnesia chapter 13 . 9/1/2014
I just stumbled across this, and holy crap is this epic! Truly fantastic, you weaved all the various crossovers together incredibly well, no stumbling, and everything felt in place. It's a shame it hasn't been updated in over 3 years, and is probably abandoned, but thank you for writing this much, and letting us read this epic goodness. I really hope to see this continue, someday in the future!
EatAToadJerkfaces chapter 13 . 6/29/2014
I just want to say that this story is good. Insanely good. I-should-have-gone-to-bed-four-hours-ago good.
I couldn't stop myself from reading; your story sucked me in, chewed me up, and spat me out at the end of this chapter, almost desperate for more. I love how you characterized Usagi, and I'm really happy about how you've shown her growth. I think it's a very realistic view of how she might grow up, and I can't help wondering what will happen to Hotaru, and the red dragon. (Very interested in the latter, by the way.)

For Keichii, I'm really not sure. I think that his characterization is consistent with the manga, and the anime, but for some reason, it feels a bit lacking in the later chapters, as if something had suddenly gone missing. Maybe I just don't understand the kind of singleminded obsession with a goal you were trying to portray? Either way, I definitely liked the 'science fair' bit, and especially the verbal spanking Gond got.

Ranma is... complicated. You're certainly doing a good job about that! I loved Koneko-chan, even from the very beginning, and I liked how she was eventually learning to speak. Ranma-chan, on the other hand, threw me for a bit of a loop. I liked how you had Shar split Ranma, but at the same time, I felt that Ranma-chan came into being with... hrm... She had her own definitely formed personality, femininity and all. I'm not sure if that's a nod to the curse, and his own suppression of his femininity, or if it was simply so that there could be a definite difference between the Ranmas, or if it was a slight side affect of being the Well of Souls, and allowing the memories of all the females to influence that aspect of his/her soul. Still, it was amusingly played with, and well written, so I don't have anything to complain about.

Is the cunning that Ranma displayed a normal part of his character? Or a side affect of, once again, being the Well of Souls? It seemed to come a bit out of left field, but if, as you said, the two female Ranmas got most of the emotions, then it would make sense that the male Ranma would be able to look at potentially upsetting situations with a more logical, tactical mindset.

Either way, I hope that eventually you continue this story, it's truly one of the best multi-crosses I've ever read, and I can't wait to read more.
Kali
Guest chapter 6 . 5/29/2014
Yeah, praying to your girlfriend seems to sort of miss the whole point of Oh My Goddess.
shugokage chapter 13 . 5/30/2014
Incredible story good job!
george17 chapter 13 . 5/29/2014
Pretty cool fic. To me it's a great idea to show how three characters that in one sense are supposed to be great in their original canon are actually tempered and truly become great.

Not sure if this fic will ever be continued but if not it didn't end at a bad point. Somewhat of a cliffhanger but at the same time not a bad conclusion to for example a Book 1.
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