I totally love how you plot your story and how descriptive it was fueling more of my imagination for my favorite pair "Shiznat". And since you mentioned a song...I'd love to read a story you can make from the song "Lucky" by Jason Mraz. I think that would fit Shizuru in a positive light I hope?

Greetings Ashishu! Yes, I love re-reading your fiction! My Girl is very engaging. Shizuru is so complex and Natsuki thoughts are insightful.

Nice touch and yes Natsuki is a bit more mature but I think she should be more mature...its 5 years!

Onward to the next chapter...wish you come back!

Take care..ciao...hope life is treating you well!

I loved every piece of this, it was amazing, thank you for sharing it...the only thing that i felt was ooc was the looong wait til they had sex for the first time, i just think it was too much even for natsuki...but anyway, the scene was beautifully written (and hot). Thank you again and keep the amazing work!

Excellent story and very interesting plot. Thanks, Ashishu. I wish you many successes in everything.

Hot damn! I really realy love this story! My gosh! It'll never grow old! I always steal time to read while working! Hahahha!

Please keep writing stories.. I've read your other stories, hope you will still update them..

Awwwwh... It's so sweet... I was so sad first 'cuz i thot shiz was biding adieu to suki by hang'n out as much as they can.. Huhuhu.. Scared me there ashisu-kun!

This fic is utterly and completely brilliant. I can't think of any more to say than that.

My ex and I had been together 5 years and he left me with my 2 year old daughter all alone and moved to a different state permanently partially, because he does off shore drilling. But it hurt a lot. I found out that he got a girlfriend FFAASTTTer than i could say goodbye...and another...and another and that hurt me I was jealous that he could because i was the primary caretaker and more because i claim that my daughter needed her dad so bad, but in reality i wanted him to be there for me also...It hurts but you have to con fort the hurt loinesss sorrow and whatever you are dealing with and put all that energy into raisin your child. I didn't have the best support group idk how yours was but i knew that i could just sit in the house all day so i gathered myself and I would put my all into my daughter now a little over a year later I have found the man of my dreams...through the help of great Zalilu, who help me in getting all i ever want in a relationship. i can now say goodbye to tear,you can get in touch with he at...

i love your story...:)

Ne, Ashishu-san can I see the picture of Natsuki? Please!

Oh my globs, I think I died from the intense chemistry and the teeth-aching fluff...
I can't believe it took me forever to find this precious thing. It's been like, what, 4 years since you finished the last chapter? Haha.

That was some pretty hot stuff. But anyway, thanks for letting me remember my love for Natsuki and Shizuru. Reading this was an absolute joy. Especially when they epitomize exactly what I want in a relationship. Heh.

Have a great day!

Loved it awesome story it made my day :)

Never get tired of reading this. :)

I just finished reading it and it Seemed incredible.
has romance, action and drama hahaha has it all and the end was really cute haha
what made me laugh When It Was The bike left the door open garage
I hope Continues writing and greetings.
Sorry for my writing my first language is not English hehe

awesome fic. thanks for it