| Reviews for Teamwork Progression |
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ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 19 . 2/12/2019 Love the side stories! It gives a nice bit of insight into the original! |
Skyrere chapter 13 . 1/21/2014 it makes sense... it makes so much sense in the fox think.. you can bring me into the thinking of the fox mind... well... your image of the fox mind...XD no one really knows until they are the fox. |
Skyrere chapter 8 . 1/21/2014 Your soul is beautiful. |
Skyrere chapter 6 . 1/21/2014 can ANYONE imagine the hell this would be? |
Skyrere chapter 5 . 1/21/2014 the emotional dynamic that you infuse in each little chapter is so powerful there is no need for pages and pages of build up. It is like being hit in the soul by an emotional sledge hammer. I like to use an 8lb maul... you should go to a hardware store and pick one up just to see what it feels like to wield one... XD Call it research... I would love to see what influence it would have on your writing. :D As always... I love you. :D You bare your soul to us whenever you post any of your writing. If we don't sync with it, it just means that we are not on that page with you. :) |
Skyrere chapter 4 . 1/21/2014 no one does team 7 like you. :D I love you. |
jj chapter 19 . 11/24/2013 wow those were cute |
JoanIncarnate chapter 19 . 7/21/2012 love the last line. |
JoanIncarnate chapter 18 . 7/21/2012 :) aw. this is the first sakura and naruto story that i've found adorable. |
JoanIncarnate chapter 16 . 7/21/2012 oh my god, this chapter has made me LOL so hard. especially about lee. this chapter was written just for the fangirls, wasn't it? i love neji and gaara, i would so not mind if naruto got with either of them. |
JoanIncarnate chapter 9 . 7/21/2012 :( aw! |
JoanIncarnate chapter 4 . 7/21/2012 that first line was definitely eye-catching. |
Skyrere chapter 16 . 10/10/2011 I love your Kyuubi commentary. XD |
KyuubiKin chapter 19 . 6/10/2009 This was amazing! You really captured Naruto and his "Inner Foxy Foxy Spirits" in his teenage years. I enjoyed reading it and felt as if I was accually in the Kyuubi's cage talking with them. Silently talking though. I think I'm now a KibaNaru and GaaNaru supporter. See what your work does? It screws with my mind! I love it! I loved it as much as I loved your deviantart comic with Naruto's bisexual dreams. But thats a different story, is it not? It was brillient. Please keep up the good work. Dattebayo! |
Eipa chapter 19 . 3/31/2009 Ive havent read it all, Im reading it at another site. It surprise that it doesnt have a lot of reviews! I love this fic Im gonna star chap 6 and wow! Is very strange to see how much you understand the characters! Not only in fiction but their personalities, they are very similar to the real characters. BUT its just something that bothers me, I dont think that if Sasuke were in that position he would be so cold, I think, but then again I wish he wasnt so cold in the manga cuz I LOVE HIM! I usually dont like SasuNaru, nah not just usually I dont like it at all but you with your fic... I love the threesome, all of them, SasuSaku, NaruSaku, SasuNaru, SasuNaruSaku... KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! |