Noooo! Don't stop there. Please continue. Your story is great.

DC comics have the dubious honor of being the Second darkest comics in the superhero world. BTVS is just plain Dark. You combine them and made this darker. I understand that there needs to be a struggle to overcome in order for an ending to have any real meaning. But be careful about what I like to call "The Deus Ex Machina Trap". I see this with so many stories it's just not funny. The writer will start on the overused as hell 'darkest before darker' crap that's so popular nowadays. They give powers/advantages to the bad guy, while the good guy does an impression of a mushroom. Kept in the dark, buried in shit. Then they realize they've written themselves into a corner. The bad guy is either winning or has outright won, and now they need a Deus ex Machina for the good guy so the hero can save the day. Every single time it kills the story. Don't let that happen here. You need to keep track of what you give to whom. And be wary of overpowering the bad guy. That being said, I love odd pairings like this. I wish there were more of them.

For 10 years you wrote this story... it was a great story too I'm pissed off that it doesn't have 1k plus views because this story deserves it.

I only have one question: Why the fuck was LEO used for a shortened Cleopatra? Why not something more female like Cleo which sounds infinitely more realistic for a little girl to use as her nickname instead of Leo.

This bugs me out, as if Superman decided to call himself Clare as a weird shortened Clark.

Please update soon, this story is my kryptonite lol

Please keep on with this story and update soon. This is my favourite smallville fanfiction and I can't get enough. I'm actually starting to get withdrawal symptoms from the lack of update. It's as if this fanfic is my kryptonite lol
Please keep up the good work and update soon

This was chapter was touching

It's so stupid that they've done everything but sex and both of them are still questioning their feelings for one another. As if the I love you a couple chapters back wasn't clue enough. Added with this fake prophesy thing this is just dragging. Clex relationship hasn't even started yet but they break up in every other chapter.

I could get used to the crossover but Lionel is just sick. Please let him be killed off asap.

Please update soon, the delay is killing me. Love the story, probably the best smallville fanfiction ever.

and... I'm out. you've written up some characters I absolutely detest and I can't stand to continue reading this story.
as such, I think you deserve some congratulations.
I'm dropping this not because it's bad but because, like a horror movie that gives you nightmares, you've written something I can't just ignore... it's rather a pity it goes against my tastes.

Great story, please update soon. This is, in my opinion, the best smallville faction around. I just love the character complexity, especially Leo's. I have the feeling there is so much more to this story that has only just hit it's potential, and I

The only thing I don't understand is why you had to make this a crossover. This story would be perfectly fine being in the Smallville category only.

Oh boy we are getting some interesting AU now

Beautiful work with this story!

I am truly captivated and look forward to more!