Instead of signal you can just say sign, other than that it was great

what a wonderful tale !

Good story...but let me just say that calling Africa the "black continent" really pisses me off...is that necessary? I mean, I know this is the view of the average ignorant American, but let me tell you now...Don't believe the hype! It is not the primitive, mysterious, backward, twisted place that people so love to think of when they talk about "Africa"...

Good story.

great fic and nice length, but one thing you might want to proof read your fic before putting it on ff.

As there was some mistakes as well as a few words that did not make sense.

But other than that i liked your style and i hope you might want to add more Tarzan fic in the future.