What about Keiichi? :"(((

ARGGGHHH one of the best MayuLoki indeed! Omy goshh for me the way how you write their personalities are not ooc specially Mayura because she's already Matured and that six long years of waiting, that is one heck of faith I dare say ! Thank u for this I hope you're still doing some MayuLoki fanfic or maybe make a sequel to this u know like thoughts of those around them? Just an idea :D

Oh my, that surely hurt her fiance but what can he do Mayura's not inlove with him, poor guy. Hahaha I thought that Mayura and Loki are going to do 'that' but nahhh hahaha

Awww it takes a lot of years for Loki to say that aloud. I can relate to that hahaha

great story love it

Aww how sweet, this was such an amazing story and it completely satisfies my fangirl heart XD. You know I expect Narugami to come in a school uniform, since he has a very big fetish and he'd be crying like an idiot because his best friend found happiness.

Freyr and Freya would be crying for different reasons XD. Freyr lost his Yamato Nadishiko and Freya lost her Loki XD hahah! Heimdall wouldn't care less, knowing him. and I think Yamato would be crying, taking picture and be super happy for his dad and Mayra and Fenrir will act the tsundere, that he is, when Loki's not near.

I guess Kotarou is also invited, since he's good friends with Loki. Idk what he would think, cept hardly accept that Narugami is Thor, considering the poor circumstances the idiot lived in when he was on earth. I think he would believe about Freya, because of her looks, and Freyr not because he's an idiot and it's hard to believe those two are siblings.

And Merry Early xmas too you! 3 weeks to go. Christmas is my fav holiday. :D

Well at least most of their problems have been wrapped up. Keiichi finally saw in that Mayura would be happier with Loki and at least he has some pride and decency, unlike some guys in movies, anime ect. As for Misao, would probably give in too after sobbing about the thought of giving away his precious daughter. XD

Nice chapter :D

Wow that was a good chapter, but Mayura shouldn't be ashamed. Better to step out before getting married then find out after. As much as Mayura's dad has a father complex, he should know and respect when his daughter changed her mind, since her happiness should be most important for him.

Anyway, so Loki's off to let Misao cool off a bit and arrange his future with our mystery crazed Mayura. Yaay!

You know even Keiichi should be grateful, it's so much better than finding out 5 years after getting married that she's in love with another guy and probadly has an affair with him, knowing Loki's reputation. That makes it even better that Misao and the others aren't aware of Loki's reputation in asgard. XD

YAAAAYY! Finally he confessed! And Mayura will finally realize that it's Loki she wants to be with.
Poor Skuld, thought it's also quite funny, since she's such a big Loki fangirl.

I need to read more! I love your writing!

That was cute, I already got the feeling when Keiichi appeared that he was Mayura's fiance... Loki's still a better match for her in my opinion. XD

I like manga Mayura more than anime version. I haven't watched the whole anime, for obvious reasons. Her manga version is funnier, livelier and crazier. Hahaha!

Go Loki! Recapture Mayura's heart and keep that reputaion of being the biggest flirt intact!

Loki, you're supposed to be asgard's infamous playboy, still you refused to take Mayura for yourself... he must have hit his head super hard.

I don't know what the norms are planning, but I think it's a good plan XD

I really enjoyed this fanfic. Ahh the heartbreaking parts just kills me but of course, there's a happy ending. Although I ponder about Mayura's father. What will happen to him when she becomes..y'know what...but seriously, what will he do when Mayura's with Loki? It makes me sad seeing Mayura papa alone.. But anyways, still a great story. Keep up the good work :)

Love this story! 3

That was such a great story. I felt the tension and felt like my heart would explode when Mayura's dad smacked her. The ending also came along great with how first Mayura eats Idun's apple to grant her eternal life. The story didn't progress too fast and was at a good pace. The story was just awesome.

OMG, i would have to say this is one of the best fanfics i have read out of any anime pairs. Keep up the great job