I admit I was getting a bit bored as it dragged on but the last chapter Harry is Finally doing something. Hope you eventually continue the story so he doesn't look so bad lol you made James and Sirius sound bad ass, he has some living up to do.

Great story, but are you going to continue on with it

Omg you CANNOT just abandon this here! Please please finish this fic!

Oh Bugger. And I just thought that there just happened to be Dementors near, not that he was at the bloody epicenter of them!

I can understand Chris, but Connor is absolutely disgusting. There is just absolutely nothing that could make you like him. Bitter and arrogant. The truth of the matter is that he has it much easier than Harry. He got his family, proper lessons in magic and knowledge about what the hell is going on. Harry is often foolish, but he has nothing. No family, no one to trust in him, to raise him, to teach him. He is used as a weapon, and here comes some pathetic kid and Harry lets him walk all over him? What the hell? Not to mention Snape. WHY the hell Harry is taking it all? Standing there like an idiot. Not defending himself, when he has much better arguments. Not to mention that they are in HIS house, so in all reality he can easily banish Snape away. But he does nothing and it's so...ARGH! So increadibly annoying. Connor, Snape, Dumbledore. Is Harry an idiot? Or just this weak?

Ah, man, you cannot leave it here. Wow, and for two years, it's been waiting - this is not good. Great story, and I am excited to see the twins and Harry in battle together. I'd like to see them completely destroy Thanotovich as a work up to Voldemort.

I honestly think Harry should not have gotten off the horse and returned to the Order, who are completely ineffective. And Dumbledore never listens, it appears. He could have kept Snape and many others unaware of the twins for their safety, and he didn't. I honestly hope that the twins and Harry get away from Dumbledore, and with the help of others who support them, start learning more and taking the fight to Voldemort.

Great fic. I hope you're planning on updating at some point. I just hope that you aren't going to let Connor and Chris keep walking all over Harry, in the beggining of the fic he was a complete badass, but now he seems to be self-destructive. Hope he snaps out of it, and kicks Connor's ass, the next time he messes with him. But like I said, Great fic! :)

Absolutely brilliant. By far one of the best Harry Potter fan fictions I've ever read. I'm so devastated to see you've stopped writing it.

Let me just say, I'm very impressed with how well written and thought out this fic is. Your writing style is smooth and the story flows nicely, which is a welcome change from some fics posted here at FFN. I love the story's plot (so far), especially how the dead watch over the living, but there are a couple of things I had a problem swallowing as I read. First off, Connor is SO full of himself! I'm starting to get really irritated with his attitude towards, well, everyone...but Harry in particular. When he said he hated Harry for living, I about blew up. Really, you hate him for living? Because that's logical. Connor seems to be such a mature and collected character that his almost childish hatred of Harry throws me off. It's not like Harry has really had any choice in the awful things that have gone on in his life, and it definitely wasn't his decision to LIVE, that was his mother's! If anything, Connor should be angry with Lily about that, but I guess that hasn't even crossed his mind? I understand that he's had a lot of hardship recently, and he's bitter about Sirius and the whole bit, but I just don't understand how he can hate Harry so much for things that really aren't his fault. Yes, Harry could be a bit better of a wizard and try harder to fight back at Voldemort and the Death Eaters, not to mention learn to take his visions with a grain of salt, but it's not like he's the brainless cow pat Connor treats him like. Connor should try to teach Harry what he knows and strengthen him, rather than tearing him down and not giving him a chance. Anyways, the second thing that gets me in this fic is how absolutely pathetic Harry is getting to be. Instead of developing more wandless magic and starting to buckle down and mature like I thought he would, Harry is suddenly acting like a little pansy girl! Ugh, I can't take it! I know he's not exactly a beast in canon either, but I think he's got a little bit more fight in him than you give him credit for. I just think he should be a bit more hardened and serious than he is in the fic, after what happened in the DoM, and the events that lead up to him staying at Grimmauld Place. I mean, it took some real guts and brains to make it out of those situatiions like he did! I was excited for him as I read those parts, thinking he was coming into his own. I hope you get him back on track soon, because he definitely needs to be on his game with Voldemort AND Rasmus on his tail. But other than those two points, I love this fic, and I'm very disappointed to see that it hasn't been updated since 2010. I hope you continue it, or at least post your notes on what was going to happen in the fic, because it's been a very enjoyable read and I'd hate to see it stay incomplete. I hope the criticism I gave doesn't upset you, because I don't mean it that way. This fic is one of my favorites that I've read, so far, and I don't mean to discourage you at all with my comments; only to give constructive criticism. Keep writing! I'll definitely stick around and keep reading. (:

Just found this story not long ago and just finished what you got and really hope you continue it one day because of the cliff hanger you left it at. Not gonna hold my breath though.

good story, except for the ending on a cliffhanger and not updating for two years.

Methinks you're a little overdue for a update, particularly when your last one ended when all the excitement was about to begin. I can only imagine how people who have been reading this from the beginning feel; I've only just read it and already I'm biting my fingernails wondering if you'll ever finish it off. If you can't gather a hint from the above reading, I love your story; it's suprises me that I havnt ever seen it before, but regardless I'm glad I found it, update or no update.

Here's cheers to the hope that you'll update eventually.

This is by far the best thing i have ever read. I was so frustrated that i couldn't figure out how connor and chris fit in and then it was like a slap in the face! This is fantastic, please update!

This is such a great, original story with such fabulous writing. But Connor is such a freaking pain in the ass it almost turns me off the entire fic because I can't stand reading about such a self-centered prick...he's such a pain! Because it's all Harry's fault that he lived and their mother died and all that other shit...ugh that kid needs a kick in the pants.

Good story so far. It got a little slow in some parts, but it's picking up nicely now. I hope you continue soon!