Wow. That was nothing short of perfect. Wrong and beautiful and scary and tragic and powerful...absolutely perfect.

Wow, that was depressing. There should be more where they find her or something.

That was pretty good. I love insanity and I love unhappy endings.

This is brilliant. Abslutely and utterly brilliant. River's characterization is amazingly done, and you can truly feel her horror as the story progresses. I love Jayne in this story as well. There is nothing to describe this fic beyond beautiful.