Great story!

If tususki had wanted to make sure his friends land stayed within his bloodline then why did he wait until Sesshomaru only had a year to find a mate to te him? Wouldn't it have helped him more to let him know way earlier?

No. I’m sure the story picks up more but I’m bored of reading about her getting injured and taking baths. It has been 5 chapters of the same thing. She’s not even going to attempt to go tell her friends she’s ok? Or her family? She’s just going to sit and train with him for however long? Too unbelievable. I can’t finish.

Thanks for continuing the best story.

Hot box, what can one say. Yes, it's hot, but a box? Loved your lemon.

Where did you come up with the moon shooting out a powerful beam?

Love you're story.

I know this chapter is about youkai and humans fighting the big bad dragon. But let's hear it for girl power or youkai power. Maybe it should be females power. Ha, I like that one.

Looking forward to the lemons. Yes, let's hear it for all the hentai's. It should be really good, because Kagome already said that Sesshomaru better be really good. To makeup for all her troubles in becoming his mate. Or something like that.

Thanks for you're writing and time.

"have her not eat or drink in front of them. Kamlyn could find a way to poison her food and we don't want to take chances. You will provide her meals and drinks and no one will suspect anything because it is the inu youkai way to make his mate submit to his power." Did Sesshomaru forget to provide food and drink to Kagome. I would think that's an important thing to remember.

Thanks for writing.

Kagome thinks something is wrong and/or going to happen? Well, let's count the ways. First, you have the education test. Second, you have the fighting test. To top it off you'll have sora and ryo fighting for matting rights. Also she can't eat or drink anything that sesshomaru doesn't give her. It's going to be a busy day in the morning. I also don't think sora will just go to bed and see you in the morning. She's going to try somethings tonight.

Don't get why females can't change into their animal self. I don't think I would give that up. I would have worked to keep it, you know exercise it or something.

Thanks for writing.

Shouldn't Kagome be stronger than she is? I think, she was strong enough to have blown up an oni, as a miko. So why is she so weak as an inu?

Thanks for your time and story.

Sesshomaru should be in the dog house. I like what you did with Inuyasha. That's the first time, I've read that in an Inuyasha fan story.

Thanks for writing and letting us read.

What is Kagome going to be a big black dog? Or is shippo and rin going to be inu, too. That would be wonderful.

Great story and thanks for writing and your time.

“Inuyasha was happy. He was with her and that's all he wanted. He would always protect her and her pups once they were born. He fell asleep as her scent relaxed him, both of them curled under the god tree as the wind was gently blowing”

Bravo! I loooove this concept. Kind of like what Kagome did for him in the canon story, except times eternity. Kagome deserves them both! *evil cackle*

Wow
More please

For this to be your first story. This is great. Very creative and detail and I can’t wait to fine reading