Abandoning the story for 6 years only to come back and abandon for at least another 4? An interesting move there

Hey you're writing skills seemed to have improved in the last 10 years (it was made in 2005 right?). I liked the plan with the hunt clan tricking rose like that. But tbh I really don't like Marnie Stewart. Yeah she's funny and all but her place in this fanfic just seems weird. I feel like the story's tone is a lot more serious and that villain is just to unrealistic to fit. I like the idea though. Maybe she would've been a good character for another fic ;)

Hey nice story! I like the idea! Anyways i got some constructive criticism. I think you couldve ended the scene between jake and lao shi in the different way. Like maybe you couldve gotten jake to show everyone the mark of a dragon slayer. It could be in the same place as rose's mark. In his hand you know. That wouldve made thing ten times more dramatic

Starting to read

That dream rose had in the last chapter of her and Jake flying in dragon form in the sky, I'm not the only one who wants that to happen, am I? *Chants "Please let it happen, Please let it happen, Please let it happen" continuously with fingers crossed* Anyway I really like this story, I hope you'll consider continuing it.

Well now this is surprising. This stories been resurrected.

Yeah! This fic is on again! I so missed it!

I LOVE that this story is back, because I was just reading it for the other day the first time and was sad it seemed to be unfinished. So cool!

where is the nect chapter -_-

Please update.

THIS IS AWESOME! Please write more?

Slylady345~

Please update soon! Can't wait to see more. And to think for once I thought the huntsman had actually shown sympathy to Jake, can't believe he plans to kill him! Course, if Jake figures that out, he'll probably WANT to switch sides. I'll be waiting for the next update! (Hopefully not for long.)

Jake's final uttering makes me think he knows more than what the Huntsclan knows. Please update. I still take that dream as a sign that, because of where Rose's loyalties really lie, the antidote won't revert her back to her slayer status even after turning Jake back into a dragon.

Watch out , YFWE, when it comes to awesomeness, I might someday surpass you, as my fiction-writing slowly but steadily improves.

Of course, you can't beat raw talent 8D

thank you for the update and good plot

ps - seriously, were you drugged when you thought up marnie stewart?