I should’ve never read the comments bro! Lol, the freaking shock when I found out it was Bobby. AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!

Scott and the cookies are hilarious.

Bobby should be in prison! He is a sick fuck mess in with a kid .with daddy issues.

Classic how bullied I am woe is me fanfic. Get off the internet dear lordy

So far I'm loving this story, but oh does it make me want to pull my hair out with this pronoun of 'he' and trying to figure out who 'he' is.

I like the story, it's written fairly well, but your OC is making me take breaks every 50 seconds. I realize this probably won't get read, so I'm going to use this as an excuse to rant. Your OC pisses me off. Sorry, but I want to pull my hair out sometimes. One minute she'll get angry when people ask her if she wants to talk about her problems, and the next she'll be angry because people aren't asking if she wants to talk about her problems. It seems to me like she's stuck in an infinite circle of angst. If this keeps going, I'm not going to be able to continue reading. Overall, I do like the story a fair bit, and you've done a good job giving most of the characters distinct personalities. Good job, one cybernetic 8-bit cookie for you!

I get the feeling that she is under the influence of the Hellfire Club and will resurface as a villain. This melancholy interlude would only work as a satisfying novel if the back jacket carried notice of a sequel. As a testimony to true life experience this story touches the cruelty and injustice of it with honesty and pathos. Perhaps the author draws on personal tragedy. Either way I hope that this intimate account has helped them come to terms with that old enemy: loss. It is a noble gift to the world.

This is as far as I got. Not really sure why your version of the xmen are so into tormenting this random teen who is going through a horrible time. Your writing style is way better yhan average for this site, but there's no plot yet to be seen and the characters are all just bullying this one poor girl who is going through serious body horror and physical trauma. The entirity of the danger room fiasco highlights just how insane these characters are. Joining the x-men in the comics is voluntary, in your story this is just random abuse.

I really like the idea of this fic and I like your OC, but it's really damn hard for me to read because of how she acts and is treated. I'm the kind of guy that if I were in her situation I would just fucking leave. If she doesn't want to be there or do those things like become an x-man or be told to not eat cookies then fucking tell them so in as brusque and insulting a manner as possible and fucking do what you want and screw any mother fucking bastard that tries to tell you no! I understand that she may actually want to be there, or is afraid of the outside world or something like that, but it really just makes me angry reading this story because I want to curse these characters out sometimes for her. Really though, I think that that just shows how good of a writer you are to even make me that emotionally invested in this story so good on you, and I hope that Kerry gets some back bone and tells Scott and Jean and whoever else to fuck themselves she can have a goddamn cookie if she wants to.

Chapter 90 is completely messed up. I don't normally say much about bad grammar because it's something most people struggle with, but this chapter is unreadable. It's bad. How it got this way is a mystery to me.
I'm going to have to skip it. Hope there wasn't anything important in this one.
Talk about frustrating.

i love everything about this. for a long time, this was the story that kept drawing me back to , so i'm so thankful that i found it and that you wrote it. you're an amazing author, rui, and this story kicks ass. thank you : )

OH HELL NO.
THIS WILL NOT BE THE COMPLETE ENDING.
FUCK NO.
yes I have resulted in profanity bc what the HELL?
Are you serious? You end the story with everyone in suspense. Like maybe she's alive, maybe she's not.
SHE BETTER BE THE FUCK ALIVE IN ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR STORIES, IM NOT PLAYING.
YES THIS WILL BE HOW MY LAST REVIEW ENDS. MKAY.

Lowkey I still love you bc you are a fantastic writer, I'm just super mad at you right now.

UGH I HATEEEEEEE YOU. I TAKE ALL MY LOVE BACK NO FREAKING WAY YOU LET HER GET KILLED.
No I don't wanna believe it.
Nope I don't believe it.
She is alive somewhere,
Kerry just needs to relax and come home.
She has to.
Omg nooooo I actually have real tears in my eyes. I fell in love with Kerry (not like that) she became a favorite character and you killed her.
You are freaking evil.

Her & Bobby together makes me wanna just scream! They are soooooo freaking cute together OMFGGGGGGG!'

It's been Bobby this WHOLE TIME? No freaking wayyyyyyyyyyyy this explains why Chris hates him so much ugh I honeslty thought it was Adrian ugh I feel so stupid. Now I have to read over all their parts again bc I know it's Bobby now! No forreal you deserve claps for this bc I really didn't think it was him, you kept it a secret and on lock that's amazing, you are an amazing writer for this. I love you & they are the cutest couple everrrrrr OMFG.