So angsty and beautiful

Thank you for writing this. Phenomenal job.

Beautiful. If these two had a conversation about their feelings, I could imagine it sounding like this. Well done. (Sorry review is late, I'm new to fanfiction hehe)

I was amazed by how many different parts of their personalities were involved here: Faith seems to be saying that Buffy's so much of a control freak that she's a bit of a girl dictator., Buffy seems to be a bit of a bully at some points- and that's always nice to read about as a touch in this series- a bit weird: the heronie being a girl-bully, but that's kind of fun to encounter in some stories., the ways they made fun of eachother during the catfights., then the tenderness at the end when Faith's crying and it seems that Elizabeth {Buffy} realized how much she hurt this young woman who just wanted to be her friend- and the way Buffy held her at the end.

For instance about the mockery: "Oh, Poor Faith. Nothing ever goes her way, she's got no one to comfort her. She'll forever be the bad guy, but she doesn't even fit in with the bad guys because she's so tormented." WOW! When Buffy gets cruel, she does tend to make fun of her targets during fights- you nailed it right on the head, and to boot: the story is written from Miss Summers Point of View!

I really love this!

Also: nice touch with the catfighting between them- the ways they constantly push eachother's buttons and the "girl hitting girl" instead of "girl hitting on girl" kind of stuff- this is oddly entertaining, but the regret and repentance is more than worth-while in terms of making this story well worth reading.

Nice Going and Well Done!

Frankly I love the entire thing!
Signed:
Cotto.

That was awesome. The writing felt a little choppy at times but the emotions in the story made it completely worth reading. My one complaint was that at first I was confused on who's POV it was. Thanks for writing and keep up the good work -Jesi Ki Kage

wow. remarkable story

Wow, this is awesome! :D First Faith/Buffy I've read, and it's completely in character. Great job!

this would be coo to go on with like more chapters

I don't even know what to say to this. This was phenominaly written. Each emotion I could see play out in my head, every action. I watched as I read, it was that clear. Fantastic job. One of the best Faith/Buffy's I've ever read.

I don't know which was harder to take, their brutal blows or their stinging words. Tragic, but always with an undercurrent of hope and that's somehow more than enough. Great job.

oh my god, this was so unbelievably good.

your take on Buffy and Faith is dead on, every time.

it was very realistic and i truly enjoyed the read.

this is by far my favorite Fuffy fic, ever!

oh god... this is so wonderfully written, so sad... and so beautiful. I hated Buffy in this until the end, how she was treating Faith... poor Faith. you have a great handle on their characters, happily the ending makes up for the angst in the middle...

Beautiful! Simply wonderful. Loved every minute of it (except when they're beating each other's brains in naturally ... haha) You wrote them brilliantly.

Okay, this was awesome. No, it was BEYOND awesome. This has to be, like, one of my favorite fanfics ever! Great job!

Write more!

Rocky

very nice. very evocative imagery. Great job capturing the anger and missed chances that are the essence of the fuffy ship.

like this one too. Like that Faith took a while to open up. Nice.