Very touching and emotional story. I was so sad to read Kiki died but Carson was a wonderful 'father' to her.

Thank you for writing this!

Wow this is nearly long enough to be a book :), and a sequel would be cool, but great story, thoroughly enjoyed reading it, thank you :D

Well thanks for writing a wonderful fic. I thought that maybe Kiki ascended...are you going to do a fic/sequel about the Temple? I'm sure rodney would want to look at where Kiki had her sight restored. Maybe that would make Beckett feel a bit better - confront the memories and find a 'healing' device. ;D

Great story. I guess I thought it would end with Kiki 'death' but it was still very emotional.

Wow that was a turn of events. Completely unexpected but none the less riveting. What are they going to do now...poor Beckett :D

Oh I can still see that light at the end of the tunnel. I think that they are making some headway. Save McKAy and Sheppard avoid the beams. Maybe when McKay's recovered he can find something in the temple that will defeat the wraith so they can leave... :D

more!

Oh well there does seem to be some light at the end of the tunnel for Kiki but what about Sheppard? :D

Very nice except there is no sense of McKay's condition. Something more would add to the tension I think. Even without lines, he is a presence and a part of the tension I should think.

Duh Duh DUH...dire circumstances for all of them. Great cliffhanger for all involved...how are you going to write them out of this? :D

Ahh where is she off to? Is she going to let the rest of us in on what she knows? :D

EEK! RODNEY!

MORE!

Secrets, secrets. Everyone always has secrets. It's not looking good for Rodney. How very exciting!

Good update though sadly short. :)

MORE PLEASE!