I enjoyed the story until the last chapter. Blackfire making Beastboy drink her milk is sexual assult by earth standards. Not to mention he is a minor.
Beastboy keeping the tapes felt out of character and was quite frankly a disgusting perversion and breach of trust. He would never do something like that. Nor would be make copies. Further more he would be conflicted to watch the full hour but ultimately out of gilt not do that to his team mates and friends. The last chapter soured the whole book for me. That was not cool.

I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. I have downloaded your story on the app. Please don't end your account on fanfiction because any story that I downloaded is not permanent. MightyMunchlax had ended their account and I lost 3 stories because of it.

The guys keeping porn of their own friends is pretty creepy and disturbing but the end was otherwise ok.

At first was a little weirded out by the idea of the main theme. But it oddly grows on you with the idea of breastfeeding. I think some of us have thought of it before. And it was such a beautiful story. So sweet and loving. The only thing that bothers me was the ending. Dirty boys. Makes you wonder if she will actually kill him now

How about making 1 of Blackfire?

it's was an awesome story but beast boy deserves a beat up from raven and starfire and black fire deserve a beat up too for making that video

That was an exceptional story. Truly well written. You affectively manage to incorporate the psychological aspect and in the same instance managed to pull the reader in allowing them to route four and desire to see this relationship come about. Well done... very impressive for a short sequenced writing. You have skill. Quite so

Amazing work, loved the storyline. The ending was especially good.

Hey man I love this fi I wish it wasn't over after only 9 chapters but it ended well. I love this bro nice job on it.

I love this whole book, This is one of my fave chapters

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I... can't believe how engaging that was. You actually made what's basically porn, interesting.

This is great make chater10

Beastboy you magnificent bastard! you'd almost think he was the one who was trained by batman!

Quite the surprise. Usually I find sex scenes boring, or even repulsive, if they are written without skill. This time... neither of those things. I thank you for providing this unusual experience.