Reviews for A Sense for Trouble
Califaction chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Aww! What an awesome story! So romantic! I love the idea of Oishi's Eiji-dar. Your writing and dialogue are so IC, and Eiji and Oishi being a Golden Pair in academics as well as tennis is adorable. I like that they're not going to the same college-it's a bit more realistic, I think, because as far as I can tell they have different goals in life career-wise. I have so many favorite lines in this: "If you want to assert independence, you should at least choose a subject you’re good at, like biology. Not asking for help with math would be like playing a match without me." "It shouldn’t have surprised him, he realized almost immediately, to open the door and find Oishi there looking worried." Oishi is so prince-charming. He needs a heroic 'Here I come to save the day!' soundtrack. I like this fic as a fluffy slice of Eiji and Oishi's life, a moment in time where the only thing they have to worry about is school, and together they can get through anything. Maybe that's what people like about this pair. It's so optimistic and hopeful, and it makes me smile. It's nice to see a couple for which being excellent friends that occasionally sleep in the same bed is 'more than enough,' because what are the odds of two teenage boys /not/ being obsessed with sex? It's brilliant that you write these guys and I don't go, "Huh? There's no sexual tension between these two teenage boys? Are they mutants?" but instead go, "Aw! That is so like them!" Because it is.

Anyway, yes. To summarize: This is quite lovely. Thanks for writing and posting!
Gabs chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Short, sweet, and gets the point across! Good job in keeping Eiji & Oishi in character!
Speadee chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
You really showed that they really are the Golden Pair: able to sense the other.
Ray chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
This one is lovely! I would not regret to stay up late to read this one. Both Oishi and Eiji are being natural shonen in a relationship that is beyond friendship and close to love. Very interesting and original.

Can I translate this into Chinese and share it with my friends?

Will credit.(show your name and your link as well)
pinksnow chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
cute fluff!_
Omni-chan chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
yes yes I do love you and your wonderful golden pair writing.
Guardian Angel Gabriel chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Oh my God that is so cute. I loved the Oishi x Eiji pairing. they are my fav.
Animegoil chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
Ah! *happy* That was such a nice, warm, fic! Cute theme, that of a sixth sense! I really liked the casualness of this fic, and just... aw, it was sweet! Cause they're still there for each other, and *sighs happily* Too sweet! Very nice thing to keep in mind before going to bed _
Deh Tennis Acrobat chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
I know it's Golden Pair fluff, but if you're a person who's not a huge fan of yaoi, you can pretend they're just friends and it's still a great fic.

Anyway, it's a great story and is really well written. _
Ginnie chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
*squeaks*

kawaii ne!

fluff! mush!

hee. note to self: try writing them as college students so you won't have to keep wrenching your hair out anymore. :D

i love it! fluffy-mushy!GP is really the best way to write the two, i think. :D
Troublesome Aries chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
aw, so adorable xD
thekatgrl chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
this was so sweet, and so well characterized. Definitely some awesome Golden Pair.
Whisper Reilman chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
That was fluffy and wonderful and every subtle little thing I could ever ask of a GP piece.