this left me wanting. it seemed more of a part of a story. it was missing the beginning and the end. this needs to be completed. you can't just put that much love, emotion, angst in such a short story. it's like only getting to read a chapter of a really good book; and the rest of the book is blank. i would really like to read the whole book. i know you can do it. i hope you do. if this little bit was good enough to upset me that there wasn't more..i know you also have the talent to make it whole.

How fluffy...

Cute, man!

I'm gonna write a fic w/ these guyses once I set up a new account (got my other one deleted for "bad conduct"...Pshh).

Toodles!

Very nice. Love it.

Boah! *sighs* that was GOOD!

I love it, really..

Cat

I love your intake on the psyche of the characters! They're so insightful.

I loved this! Already filed it into my computer under favorites. :) Great job with the emotion of each character and detailing Clark's cross to bare, very nice.