Reviews for TLOD: The Next Generation: Throne of Darkness
Josh chapter 31 . 2/5/2013
This story is inspirational. Read it through twice with several years in between, the second time as a working adult, and enjoyed it immensly both times. Your writing talent is phenomenal, and i hope i can read a published book writen by you the future. I know this is one review, and you deserve so much more, but thats because internet is bad where i came from and i cannot wait to read the next chapter whenever i just finished one. Anyway, all the best, and you would do the world a favor if you keep writing.
metal-soldier chapter 6 . 5/7/2007
well thats sad... i mean if ben is going to die then well i dont know lolz
metal-soldier chapter 5 . 5/3/2007
loved that fight seen... but is kind of a god mod and shit
metal-soldier chapter 4 . 5/3/2007
WHAT? PREGNANT... thats not cool.. that should have killed her...
metal-soldier chapter 3 . 5/3/2007
loved it and i whant to read the next one right away lolz i want to see whats wrong with Christie
metal-soldier chapter 2 . 5/3/2007
awesome loved the game and loved your story im going to read the third one now lolz
Via-chan chapter 31 . 1/1/2007
Wow!you guys did a good job with this series. Sorry I haven't reviewed in such a long time.

Poor Chris. I wish he could have lived. But it was good that he accepted himself. And you have to die, that's a good way to go.

Nice job guys.
Angeni chapter 9 . 12/27/2006
*whimpers*
Angeni chapter 4 . 12/27/2006
Gr...you guys are sick, demonic, and DEAD! How DARE you do that to Christie! ARGH!
Angeni chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
AH! THIS IS SO COOL! *grins big* I'm all excited now! Heck, I'm even reviewing! *winks* So far..this is probably my favorite of the stories..and I haven't even finished the first chapter! ...And I can totally see Robert Doing that... YEA! They tied the knot! (I'm giggling insanely by the way) Whew, no more chocolate for me, But seriously! Awesome chapter and can't wait to see what happens next! (and if you haven't figured out who this is yet...I'm dissapointed)
Puppyguy13 chapter 31 . 12/15/2006
Aw..im gonna miss the stories! *cries*
ace8488 chapter 31 . 12/12/2006
Great ending! I almost started to tear up, almost. This was a great way to end it all, you didnt really leave any loose ends, and THANK YOU for using the TRUE HYBRID name, it made me feel special. I know its cliche, but i have to say it, They made sure to go out with a bang! The way you used purpose in this chapter was really something, and i laughed when Lucifer ran for cover. That high-five really pulls at the heart strings. I know i dont want them to die, but it is the only way to avoid endless torture, and show evil why good wins, but that doesnt make it any less emotional. On a technical note, there where a few typos in this chapter, but besides that it was spotless. Oh, and one thing did kinda irk me, Christie seemed like a Mary Sue character in the last part, she gave the perfect answer, the one that everyone knows is right, but no one would really give. She shifted from freaked out mother who just got her kid back from the bowls of hell, to an overly understanding smiling angel who was more than happy to let her kid go back into said bowls of hell. The shift felt kinda awkward, but i guess it worked. Also, Christie was the only dragoon mentioned after Chris got back, i understand her need for a special moment with her kid, but was he so emotionally distanced from the others that they didnt feel the need to give a personal goodbye? I know that this is more or less Chris's story, but at the same time, i feel like the ending of the series should at least include a goodbye from the other characters. At this point i have no clue why i am still nitpicking, please feel free to ignore me, because the part after he re-entered the depths of hell was perfect. It has been one hell of a ride, and you guys are great authors, it has been an honor reading and reviewing your stories. *bows before the greatness of Archangel and Spike*

Good Luck in the future _
SeraphimEmperor chapter 31 . 12/12/2006
Wow, words can't even DESCRIBE how brilliant that ending was! It'll be sad to see you two dissapear off the fanfiction scene, but if you do come back then i'm sure everyone will be eagerly awaiting the next story!

Thanks for all your efforts!
Nethrenia chapter 31 . 12/12/2006
*blows trumpet*

As you said it, it was grand! Man, it was...just...COOL!

It is a pity to mark that I'm not reading your works anymore from now, you've been a great part of my life, a real enjoyment. Thanks for your awesome arts, hope you'll ejoy live. Ciao!
anonymous chapter 31 . 12/11/2006
That was THE BEST SERIES I HAVE EVER READ ON COMPLETELY AWESOME! You guys are gonna be famous writers some day, thats for sure _

Man, I hope there will be more stories like this by you guys.

~Go Dragoons!
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