What Papermate said about not compromising Trowa's or Quatre's personality was right. Not only have you managed to not make Quatre the weeping damsel in distress that most people seem to write him as, but the portrayals for both characters resonates strongly with what can be interpreted from the series. I think the Heero/Duo parts were probably unnecessary (and a bit over the top), but Quatre's and Trowa's responses to them were great.

I really enjoyed reading your fanfiction. You were able to give us a cute 3x4 story without compromising Trowa or Quatre's personality. I look forward to reading more of your works soon. :D

Cute!

You know, you could havve lie, written "the end" on the end of that, and nobody would have questioned you.

well, anyways, good going and update soon

Mnmngood~!

Like chicken noodle soup! :D

I always loved TQ.

Some reason they just make me laugh.

Aw

[coughs] And um.. Heero and Duo. Lol!

Shut up idiot, they'll hear us!

LMFAO

.Go~!

Aw Quatre and Trowa.

Those two have always either made me laugh or go Aww..

I really like how you've written Trowa.

It's always interesting to see things from his perspective. :D

is this the end?

aww

it was cute

well written and interesting )

and of course, filled with traces of angst )

good lemon. i wish i had more to say...but i don't.

Great ch as usual. It was a little-lacking- though in plot. This chapter was great enough though as long as you continue!

One of the best I've read. Good righting style, realistic; Trowa is not cold and Quatre is not pathetic.

o.o

that was interesting

i'm glad you finally updated

i'll be looking forward to more )

I've never read a better interpretation of Trowa. He's so realistic and you can really see how much thought you've put into him. You've managed to make Trowa sound more experienced as a soldier, without ridiculing Quatre, and indeed highlighting Quatre's own best qualities. It's very rare that a person can write two characters so well without making one seem superior to the other. I love this fic. Please keep writing.

How interesting... lovely scene too. can't wait for another update _

I loved it! They are so cute together! WOnder what else will happen to them. Hope you can continue it soon.

Kisses, kathy

very interesting story. well written, and entertaining. i am very much looking forward to the next chapter. please update soon.