This fic was sad, but I like it. Make sure you credit the artist when you use lyrics from a song, though ("Damn Cold Night," Avril Lavigne).

Once again, I am completely astounded by your flowing words. Pure poetry, and that I have said less than a handfull of people. My heart ached for Hermione when she began her journey in the rain - and I loved that you picked out november out of the months, because my birthday is in november. (Nov.16)

Hi, great story, actually all of your stories are great, but I don't review often, so I'll condense it into this one. I think you should continue with this pairing, you have a real nack for it. I noticed, too, that you used the phrases "comfortably numb", "damn cold night" and "take me by the hand, take me somewhere new" in another of your oneshots and I was wondering if you did it on purpose. I wouldn't have noticed, but I'm pretty sure the former is the name of a song and I KNOW that the latter two are lyrics in an Avril Lavigne song. Maybe there are others and it's actually painfully obvious that it was indeed intentional and I'm just being daft. Be that as it may, I just thought I'd point it out.

i loved your story but i think it would be cool if it went on a little and maybe showed the nice side of snape. your story ended in november. what happened to the rest of the year, your a good writer and i believe you should go on but that is entirely your choice.

~lindy~

Very nice for a first attempt at this pairing... And a nice open ending too. Your writing style is pleasant, and I liked that you didn't take it further than you did.

First off, I love Guns N' Roses, haha. Second, like the fic. Very well written, definately describes Snape to a T. Well, I'm done. I just felt like leaving a review, because I always leave reviews for stories I like.

omg. that was beautifully done.i don't know why u don't start a sshg fanfic. like a long one. you said in the beginning that the pairing is difficult and has to be written properly. i agree with you. i usually read sshg pairings not because i like them, but the way ff authors who do this pairing are on a higher level. usually, authors who choose sshg need to have depth. and u have it. both the characters are very pronounced and strong. not your average hero/heroine. they have brains! haha..

i went to your profile and noticed that you mostly do 1 shots. really, what a waste. u should be writing a sshg epic!

*sniff* i hope serveus (sp) will return her love. please continue you fic! i really enjoyed it!

i liked it and I would like it to continue. You did a good job.I hope that you finish this story!

~EvE~

Great story! I have never really read any Snape and Hermoine (I dunno if this is correct spelling of her name. If not, please pardon my spelling). Is it a one-shot or continued story? Either way, I think this story is fascinating. Keep up the great work!

Hi. This is a really good fic and written well too. Only problem is Proffessor is spelled wrong but that is okay. I see that alot in other fics. It would be nice to see a continuation or a sequal or like a future fic. Like what happened afterwards to Severus and Hermione. I believe you captured both personalities very well and what their reactions would be. Bravo to you. Excellent first SS/HG fic and believe me I'm a SS/HG addict.

*sigh* Not everything can have a happy ending. You, of course, already knew this. Your story was really pretty good.

That was an amazing fic. Despite the fact that it was most likely started out as a one-shot, I encourage you to continue with this. I also encourage you to write more of these SSHG fics because you possess a talent for it. In other words, Great job and I hope to see more from you soon!

~Firesblood~

WOW, a wonderful story. Don't stop writing HG/SS.

Is this a one-shot or will there be more...? After all, SS is indeed a very complex character and he might not really mean what he is saying..

Wow, that was amazing. It was a nice change to see Snape as JK would have wrote him(even though I was silently hoping he would be out of character and just even acknowledge her). It was beautifully written either way. Have you considered continueing this story and allow us to find out about HErmione in the rain?