This was something that was never addressed, but I feel like this chapter is so realistic!

If only the show would show this kind of emotion, rather than just streamed rolled it like nothing happened... damn it. Thank you for this fic, it's more satisfying.

Hey, this was a cool little missing scene one shot! Good job!

Cheers,

Del

Thank you very much for your reviews on my fic Broken. I have indeed exchanged many emails with the previous reviewer and she has explained her critism more and we have come to an understanding. *G*

I do agree the title isn't the best, but I haven't thought of anything better yet!

I'm afraid at the moment there are no plans to continue it, it was a one-shot look of how I would have liked Logan to have reacted, but sadly we didn't get to see.

Thanks again!

Ignore that last review. I do agree that the story might benefit from a different title, but I like the line about violets, and I in no way find it inconsistent with the tone of the rest of the story.

Will there be a second chapter?

Please Update soon.

Yeah, we wish.

But no, seriously now, cool story (well, chapter)!

I don't like the title. It doesn't fit as great as something else could.

I liked the line, 'she smelled of lilacs, tears, hope and Veronica'. That was almost poetic. But the rest of it wasn't so. It would almost have been better if you didn't put that line it. It makes it inconstant.

The ending could do with improvement, too.