Really great job! You have wrote an amazing sotry, congratulations! Keep writing like that.

i always liked veronica.. a lot.. she looks so unique! I love her too!

finally i found a M/V story. Strangely I loved them as a couple the first time i started watching this show. I almost lost my interest when she disappeared in season 2. I just loved her and couldn't like Sara, I don't know why. Anyway loved your story so much. It was really beautiful. Thanks.

aw...my friend sitting next to me says i look like i'm about to cry.

that's so sad and so beautiful and...*frustrated noise* beuaticul and i've run out of words to describe it.

I really liked this story! :) I'm a M/V shipper and the bitter sweet warmth in this one was very touching. )

Great work! Thanks for charing. :)

Yay! Michael/Veronica! It's very rare! Thank goodness yours is well-written, with real emotional depth to it. I LOVE it. I've only started watching Prison Break and, though Michael/Sara is pretty obvious, the only ship that appealed to me is Michael/Veronica. I love this idea of them consoling each other over Lincoln. Anyway, thanks for writing!

That was really good, really vivid and sexy. I like the idea of them together. I think you captured how it would go. The story title reads "Guitless". The last two sentences in the first paragraph both have mistakes. Maybe "Instead she stays behind." Should be "stays back". Typo " She grabs his leave" instead of sleeve? I liked this a lot.

Wow, I hadn't really thought of Michael and Veronica together, but you made it seem plausible. Great job and a very interesting twist on things. Certainly both of them felt betrayed by him and what a way to get back at him; Even though it seems contrary to Michael's character, I liked it.

I loved this. Very well written and I loved the way you wrote Michael's stream of concsciousness. Exactly they way I thought he'd be thinking in a situation like this. Great work - please write more!