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Great story, I hope this is not the ending!

Thank you. You are a great writer and i hope to someday be able to write as you do. I actually cried at the end.

I read last chapter only (wanted to see if wild dragons meet eragon) and I must say. I really hate that boy.

Want to see him die.. ehm.. sorry I end my blabing

this is SUCH a great novel, I mean NOVEL, this is WAY above being classed with mere "fanfiction". I LOVE the angle of Ravana having never chosen to be the black dragon, and how he only becomes evil because people treat him as though he already is! it's too bad I can't write a longer review(this one is too short for as much praise as the NOVEL deserves), but I've already stayed up till 10:52 reading black dragon! (I read this one first, but was so eager to read the next one that I haven't gotten around to reviewing yet!

cerberus

i loved it

it was oridinal and facinating

but i thout eragons dragon was white...

oh well awsome story

I love this story and the others that you have written. I haven't finnished From White to Black, but it is frickin awsome!

Keep up the awsome work

That was amazing! although thats not why i reviewed. maybe youve heard of her, an anon. reviewer who made a terrible mistake when she disgraced my story by flaming it. its not that it was a flame that i care about, it was that she told me my story was cliche horrid and should be taken off fanfiction. not just that. "it is just another galbatorix's-freakin-daughter plot" she said. i had just said jokingly that i had just written 1145 words. yay, right? no. she insists that she has written far better far longer and that unless it turns out better than adurna's dragon it wouldnt be missed. she said i had no right to demand reviews-honestly i was just joking-and that i didnt deserve any thats how bad my story was. the first sentence went: "door opens showing DSF-ill tell you her name later- holding a voodoo doll of opifex the singer while simultaneously stabbing pins into it". i dont know about you but that is just creepy. -she said the reason she was doing that was because she wasnt happy with your ending of one of your stories. im sorry, but you dont stab people for unhappy endings. if she flames writers that bad when shes mad at an ending, i dont want to know what happens to her poor family when something actually bad happens.- she said that she might not blast me with more flames if the main character isnt halfelven and doesnt fall in love with murtagh. who said she was? What really ticks me off is that she hasnt written any stories. what right has she that she may flame my genius when she has none to show? Her name was Du Shurtagal Freohr or something of the sort. Tell me if she is an all around flamer or just hates me and my stories. oh, how i wish i could reply to her review. i leave you with this happy thought: Curses upon her and her descendants for what she has done. may she grow into a woman so despicably and horridly ugly, when someone passes her they cry out in horror "oh my *, what is that thing!" -i feel better now XD-

Poor Ravana, he never stopped suffering in his life. And when he thought it night finally be over, everything precious was torn from him.

I'm gonna go read the sequal now.

I'm not sure how long ago you wrote this or even if you're reading this but I want you to know that I've never read something this fantastic, no, really, it's completely unique in this website. I just hope you make more...

awesome story. sorrie i havent reviewed earlier. i really like it. very orignal.

wow!I can't believe that you only got six reviews for this! it was a great story and held me captivated for days. I really loved it! Keep writing!

cro.

Aw, poor Ravana. I like your story, though. Keep up the good work!

~DHW27

Truly one of the most well-written stories I've read on Well done! I applaud this story! 20 out of ten! SENSATIONAL! I'm off to read the sequels!

~Keely

wow this is really well written. i felt sorry for ravana thought the whole thing; just because of a prophesy he was proclaimed evil. i think the part when eragon told him he was a mistake was a sign of the ignorance of the elves before they started to truly understand the dragons.

the only thing that i dont like is the fact that it ends on a cliffhanger; unless that is, there are going to be more chapters in this story.. other than that, i think its awesome!