Damn, you really came back 15 years later to add chapter 2

So thanks to the series coming back to the spotlight, I'll revisit this. I lost the drafts I had so I will have to essentially rewrite this. Kicking myself for dropping the ball...

it has been nearly 15 years since the last update... I'm still waiting for the story cuz its so good!

THANKS FOR LEAVING ME HANGING! HELLO IT'S BEEN, WHAT? ALMOST A YEAR! COME ONE! ONE WOULD THINK THAT YOU ABANDONED THE STORY!

ok, i'm done beeing angry, so if i may, i would like to suggest somethings that might make your writing more brilliant than it already is.

first-more vibrant words and phrases

-some readers LOVE to have an author who has a vocabulary

second-organize your writing better

-if you want readers to leave well thought out comments, your writing needs to be well thought out

third-incorperate your own personality into the writing, while maintaining the character's personalities

-everybody loves a spunky writer that's full of things to say, interesting things, mind you

fourth-go through your writing to see if you want to change anything or to correct any errors or grammatical mistakes

-your readers have to understand your writing in order to leave spectacular comments

i hope this advice coming from an eleven year old [me] will help you on your way to success in the world of authors

also, i'm thinking about posting some of my fan fiction on this site, and i would really appreciate it if you would review it and be merciless in your criticism [just make sure it's CONSTRUCTIVE criticism!

keep writing and sorry that this review/advice column is so long! cheers!

ok, something was seriously wrong with this chapter! Katara does not focus on food more than their safety, she would be quick to piss Jet off, and last, she would NOT kiss Zuko, it should be the other way around. other than that, i'm fine! keep writing!

this chapter went too fast for the relationship between Katara and Zuko. i'm not saying that's a problem [he he I'm a Zutarian] but based on their past conflicts against each other, i don't think Zuko would let Katara lay down next to him, much less put his arm around her. keep writing!

ps. Zutarians shall dominate the globe [yeah i know, stupid :p]

Hey,I LOVE your story so far!

It's just so sweet! I'm a total Zutara fan.

And since your story isn't finished yet, I just want to tell you something - PLEASE don't make it a tragic or sad story,or ending,or whatever. Cuz U know,every Zuko and Katara fic I've read always ended so tragic and depressing :( So please don't let that happen with your story! Make it a happy ending :)

PLEASE? Well,anyway,great chapters! The endings of the chapters were so sweet! Keep up the good work! ;)

~Lisa~

I liked the third chapter. I'm a sucker for that stuff but HELLO! Where ARE you!

aw... how cute! this is really good! i hope you get some new chapters up! please hurry! lol

Hm Zuko seems a little OC. Great story though!

K and Z's relationship is moving a bit fast.

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Oh thank goodness. I thought you abandoned this story.

That's all right, I'm a very patient.

Waahh... Oh well... I'LL WAIT!

Please write more! I want more cause you are clearly a good writer! Please write for your adoring fan Yumi Hakurshoua. I think you are really good and would love to hear more.