OMG!*tears* SO funny! If u can, CONTINUE!

Ok, I'm hurting from laughing so hard! You have such an amazing talent for degrading Ardeth in a most hilarious way. If I weren't laughing so hard, I might feel embarrassement for the poor guy, lol! But as it sits, I don't have the time for any form of conscious thought or anything at all for that matter, in between burst of laughter other than to take a much needed gasp for dearly needed oxygen!

And um, I said "All for one, and buns for all." Geez, lolol! Well, come to think of it, those buns would be a pretty nice grab, huh? Wishful thinking, yes, my, my!

Yes, oh yes, I 'do' so love the lighter side of life, lolol. You made my day!

LuWanda

Wiping away tears of laughter! Catching my breath. So Funny! So Very Very Funny! And I got the BIG speech! It was me! Me! Ahem, sorry.

Did I see Boromir wander in, lost and forlorn, looking for direction? Oh okay, I'll stick to the story at hand. That cutie butt is looking good against dizzy Med-jai, even if it does bake cookies ;)

So loved Jonathan in Rambo Mode!

Excellent. Laughed aloud from Nick and Frank all the way through to us tent crashers. Just hilarious! :D

That was hilarious! I was reading it and i forgot i had to catch the bus to go to a computer i realised it i printed it and took it with me, on the next bus. Reading it, i missed my stop and had to stop at the next one, two miles away from my target. all that for your story.

Go on, go on!Odeds surname in the movie is Kokoris? lmao! Kokoris! You know what that means in greek? Lolololol!

Well, i like our mission lady! ;-) All for one and one for all!

Hahaha! Very funny my friend!

Carnahan shook his head and paced. “What are you gonna do when those steroids turn to hemorrhoids, you ruddy wanker?”

Hahaha. Yes, lets devirginize Ardeth! Could anything be more fun? And I got a sense that lady Marxbros might be having a little fling with Carnahan. Could it be true? I just might swoon!

Yes, please continue this delightful diversion ;-) -Lady M

ROTFLOL! That was hysterical! You're a nut! ;) I haven't lost faith in Ardeth Bay in real life, just in the story! :P Get it right, woman! LOLOLOLOL ;) ;) ;) ;) ;)

Another lovely chapter that had me giggling in work and making my coworkers wonder exactly what I've been up to but I do have a question...why is Lady Marcher out to get Lady Mommints! *pout*

Methinks I need to remedy that somehow, you would think with all those scimitar lessons given to me by Nabil and Berin...;-)

Is there more? ;-)

Another lovely chapter that had me giggling in work and making my coworkers wonder exactly what I've been up to but I do have a question...why is Lady Marcher out to get Lady Mommints! *pout*

Methinks I need to remedy that somehow, you would think with all those scimitar lessons given to me by Nabil and Berin...;-)

Is there more? ;-)

that was cute. very cute. very funny, and very cute. sorry i just love frogs.

I'm a big Ardeth fan, AND a fan of many of the writers you've just dissed . and I'm still rolling on the floor laughing:D This was priceless!

This review is for chapter 5, but wouldn't let me post it there again! :-( hmmp...

Anyway. This reminds em of a game we used to play at primary school "Beat the boys in the break". In was great. But hey, did you forget a wife?

Oh... My god... I couldn't stop laughing. That was very good... We need a sequel! Ardeth's wives... Oh... My sides hurt... You know, i have thought of that many times but i have never had teh courage to write it. Congratulations!

HE TWEAKED MY NOSE!

I don't share! Never, never, never...so there! :P And what's Mommints doing splicing me and Ardeth with her whizzing dagger? Hmmmm?

HAHAHAHAHA! I loved it! Thank you, Thank you! It was just the remedy I needed after the drudging through the beginnings of a re-write.

The thong slapping Ardeth's face was hilarious. Thank you again...I just laughed so hard xxx :D

Both excellent :) Cant decide on which version I prefer, but I think I lean towards the second. Spotted undies..hehehe! Maybe speedos!

Wow. Heavy stuff. Very nicely written. I assumed that Necromancer would betray Ardeth, and I like how you've done it, in both versions. I almost like the first version better: Necromancer's futile anger and the battling of wills of the different forms of the undead. Very interesting. I can't wait until this shows up in Softly. -M