NO THE FEELS

I CAN'T.

I weep, for you were not Icarus but the beautiful sun above yet they dragged you down, to tehir level and below when all you did was raise them up.

That's my short response to your beautiful poem I had to write... Very nice, very well done.

This was simply... Words cannot describe this. What is it that We should call something that is more beautiful than beauty itself?

Beautiful. The eloquence of your writing made it a joy to read despite the sad tone of the words, and the emotion in them made my heart ache. This is one I will definitely read more than once. :)

'lioness

Wow, a very good piece of writing here, the way you mesh the two stories into one is masterful.

Cel

So beautiful.

Oh how I wish it were not true...

Beautifully written and so true.

Cool i loved this even though it was so sad and melancholy.

i would really like to know what inspired you to write this,...this is very good, and so deep...

This is a wonderful poem! Or is it a song?

Well the content is really sad, but propably true!

You are really a great writer!

Words fail me I'm crying so hard...

this is so sublime, speaking of it is disrespect.

Just reread it. I think you know what you've achieved.

sorry, completely reduced to tears and inarticulate

nice, touching. i like it.

I weep, too. Just sitting here sobbing like an 's hard to find good poetry. Love the repetition of "little boy". and "I weep." Would write more but am too busy blubbering.

Very nice. Great job.

*sniff*. *tear.* I like.