Chapters 13 and 14 are the same. It makes for a rather weird jump from 'Naruto is dying!' to 'He is perfectly fine!'. Just felt like I should point it out )

where is chapter 14 this is chapter 13 again?

God...I would really like to kill Sakura, now! Or make her die in the story! Somehow!

OMG! Sakura that *itch! One of these days, I will so kill her then cook her then feed it to the crows! ACK!

I SO DO NOT TRUST SAKURA! Ack! Must punch! GOD! *chokes Sakura* She is so, so, so ugh!

Anyways...this story is so damn good!

Whoa! Who are these people? What is Naruto! Ack!

*slams head on the desk*

Ehehe.

i am enjoying this story, i sent a private message as well, but as a precaution, i thought to inform you that where chapter 14 would be is actually chapter 13 re-posted, i hope you could fix it so as i(along with any future readers) may read the chapter and not have to make guesses .

~lorax

God, it had been so long from the last update that I had forgotten the whole fic... xD Thx for the UD, i hope you'll UD ASAP... thx...

The song lyrics has absolutely nothing to do with your fic... It's just a way to tell you that I was here and that I loved your story...

... just song lyrics, don't mind me...

Mama please stop cryin'

I can't stand the sound

Your pain is painful

and it's tearin' me down

I hear glasses breaking

As I sit up in my bed

I told god you didn't mean

Those nasty things you said

You fight about money

about me and my brother

And this I come home to

This is my shelter

It ain't easy, growin' up in World War 3

Never knowin' what love could be

You'll see, I don't want love to destroy me

Like it has done my family

Can we work it out?

Can we be a family?

I promise I'll be better

Mommy I'll do anything

Can we work it out?

Can we be a family?

I promise I'll be better

Daddy please don't leave

Daddy please stop yellin'

I can't stand the sound

Make mama stop cryin'

'Cause I need you around

My mama she loves you

No matter what she says it's true

I know that she hurts you

But remember I love you too!

I ran away today, ran from the noise

Ran away (ran away)

Don't wanna go back to that place

But don't have no choice, no way

It ain't easy, growin' up in World War 3

Never knowin' what love could be

But I've seen, I don't want love to destroy me

Like it did my family

Can we work it out?

Can we be a family?

I promise I'll be better

Mommy I'll do anything

Can we work it out?

Can we be a family?

I promise I'll be better

Daddy please don't leave

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

Let's play pretend,

and act like it Comes naturally

I don't wanna have to split the holidays

I don't want two addresses

I don't want a stepbrother anyways

And I don't want my mom to have to change her last name

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

We look pretty normal

let's go back to that

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

Let's play pretend,

act like goes naturally

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

We look pretty normal

let's go back to that

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

Let's play pretend, act like it

Comes naturally

(can we work it out)

(can we be a family)

(promise ill be better)

(mom ill do anything)

(can we work it out)

(can we be a family)

(promise ill be betta)

(dady please dont leave)

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

We look pretty normal

let's go back to that

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

We look pretty normal

let's go back to that

Daddy don't leave... daddy don't leave

Daddy don't leave

turn around please

remember that the night you left you

took my shining star?

daddy dont...daddy dont leave

daddy dont leave

dont leave us here alone

Mom l'll be nicer

I'll be so much better

I'll tell my brother

I won't spill the milk at dinner

I'll be so much better

I'll do everything right

I'll be your little girl forever

I'll go to sleep at night

even though i did not get to read the whole story i think it was very exiciting

Palcing in favorites!

The story is/was great, so thank for leaving the cliffies. So I'm very sorry to hear that your ending the story without the full details, but thank you for making it.

And I sorry for making this a really long!

im so dissapinted that this stroy can't be continued but thankyou for giving us the summary for the rest of the story i appreciate it looking forward to more of your stories

I just read your first capter and I have to say that I really like your style. Well, I have too read more, bye!

this is so awesome I was hooked the moment I read this story, I was wooty for naruto and sasuke and their friends and booing the evil people like sakura in this story. This story is told in great detail and I felt I was right there with the characters and in the adenture that they were in anyway I hope more chapters will come and I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. btw I'm obessed about reading and I spent three or four days reading the WHOLE STORY! when I found something that catches my eye I read non-stop. This story on a scale from 1-10 is a 20 for me

(Is covered in blood from killing Sakura) That damn bitch she just wouldn't die! She could have made it a lot less painful, but I did have fun! Hope Naruto will be okay after he finds out!