short, sweet, and loved every word of it~you keep writing like this and i'll be sure to read more of your work. i realize that a story doesn't have to be long to be good. i love sess/kag fan fiction. they are the best to read. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

Really good, just one note; she handed him ramen in a bowl not a bowel. A bowl is a semi circular vessel for food. A bowel is where your body processes that food. So unless he was eating ramen from a really crappy (pun intended) container, you may want to fix that.

sigh... so much weird drama that doesn't make sense... i see it in a lot of fanfiction, so i am not surprised, and it isn't necessarily a bad thing... and sesshomaru's character is just all over the place. :(

im lowkey pissed that kags was worried sesh wouldnt like that she wasnt a virgin / it was with inuyasha. i was glad he wasnt pissed and was logical about it, but wtf kagome. she should have been ready to pimp slap him if he cared about that crap. its not like he was a virgin. ayyyy, these notions of female worth, ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

veyr very good story! thanks!

I just finished reading this story on Spark, and I'm glad to see that it's here too so I can tell you:
I enjoyed reading this so much! Great work!

Yay I love this! So cute!
Love is made in trust and

He deserves no forgiveness. But i still love the story

Lol! Who says "Do you wish another release"? Way to kill the mood Sesshy

is there a reason you wrote only one story?

Great story.

*squeals*

That was beautiful!

hi.

i lloovvee this story .

i can read him 5 tumes a day.

its a great story you should pablish it.

Okay, I first have to say that your writing style is one of the best I have seen, and when you spend as much time as I do reading thats saying something. I LOVED this story and there are no words coming to me at this moment and if you ask my friends they will say that is a twice in a lifetime occurrence. Your story just flowed together perfectly. You didn't put in those annoying Author's Note in the middle of the story and it was so clean, no mistakes that I was and I want to applaud you on everything. And I so hope you write more stories. I have one up thats under construction because of a comment I got on this site and I've been thinking that its my story and I'mm just taking it off this site because of that, and I'm not changing anything! Well enough about me sorry about the rant there. At the risk of sounding repetitive I hope you write more and know I will read anything you put up. Oh, and I added you to my Favorite Author's!

Sincerely

HeartlessDreamer13

I read all of this story in one day. It was that good. Hope you write some more. I see that your planning to, not that I checked or anything. :)