WOW! I am not a big fan of the Hellraiser movies or media but I have seen a few of the movies and I got to say you are doing an exclant job staying true to that reality even introducing it into the cartoony wold of Kim Possible. It is a shame that you have only got 5 chapters into the story and no real lead up to a closing. I am almost compltly sure that there will be no Kim Possible like fights in this story. It seemed like there might have been in the first chapter but as the story moved into the Pinhead element of the crossover its becomming unlikely that actual fights will take place. I would like to say that I think you are doing an exalent job in the telling of this story. It dosn't surprise me as you have always told a great story, even when the subject matter was graphic. So for that I would like to say this. Thank you for the story.

OMFG! that was F***ING AMAZING! i canot wait for the next chapter and plezzzz dont leave out any of the juicy X'rated stuff ;) lol keep up the awesome work _

Oh please, at least one other chapter!

hm, so. Mrs. Possible; DEAD! Jim and Tim; DEAD! Monique; if this story had continued, DEAD! Mr Possible too. oh, not to mention Pixie sscout girl. What about Rufus though? nah. oh, but those bedamned angels/demons? HELL YEAH, THEY GOTTA DIE! what's left of their souls are stained with the blood of the wicked and the innocent. and they just need to die for the gore of it. DIE! DIE FILTHY MONSTERS THAT EVEN DEFY ALL RELIGIOUS LOGIC, DIE!

oh, and KP and Ron needta be the ones who kill them, yuppers.

and what the hellraiser didja mean by not for young people? I could come up with something slightly more scary in half the time it took you to write one of these chapters, yah! okay, maybe, maybe not...

ah, too muthafreakin much of a good thing can get you killed. slowly and painfully. hm, they dead yet?

nonoNO, thats not too twisted,., but it is a little sick, ya know? lemme guess, those 'angels' were those... things Ron saw last chapter, huh? ah, shit, I bet I know what's gonna happen. an I don't like it...

kay, first things first; I've never heard of Hellraiser, or at least not the one that your talking about. two, those figures... just too creepy to imagine. what were they? it's not scary enough to give you nightmares, though. good, for first chapter.

This has been pretty good. While the whole 'angels' thing had been pretty new to me (as usually it's just 'open box horrible death'), but you did get around to slaughtering the family (not necessarily a good thing, but expected from anything dealing with Pinhead). I'm kinda surprised that you left Ron and Kim out of it though. I was expecting that they would open the box and come out, like with Ron that first night, only this time Kim would be aware of them and they would start whatever rampage and battle you could think up. Well, whatever. This has been good, and I look forward to future chapters. Good luck!

FOR THE LOVE OF HUMANITY, PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Now that I have that out of my system, I very much enjoyed this tale and can not wait till the net chapter. I have not seen the hellrasier movies, so I will have to take your word for it all. What happened to Ramesh?

What can you tell me about a story you were working on called "Kim Possible: Project Bless".

great, can't wait for a update.

This story is SICK, TWISTED and WRONG! ... ... And I love it. Heh heh heh! Update soon okay? D

MY GOD ITS SICK AND WRONG!...i am SO reading another chapter

OK so I'm having a little bit of trouble following this story so start off. Kim and Ron are Global Justice Agents. Kim gets a call from her mom saying she and her dad are divorced because her dad cheated on her mom. Now kim doesnt know that her dad had a perfectly fine right to divorce her mom becuz she was obsessed with a box sleeping with his co-workers and might have been sexually molesting his sons. Now kim blames her dad and her mothers a sex crazed maniac all becuz of the box. Now this box contains that pinhead guy that is supposedly a demon from hell correct. Also this box is im guessing a portal to hell which would be why it has demons from hell in it. Now kim is feeling bad becuz she wants to start a relationship with ron even though her mother has been going throug rough times. Now the twins are sleeping with their mom and open the box which lets out the demons which they think are angels? Thne the demons take them into the box. Then monique comes along and enters the house finds a dead body (still confused on how that got there) and then goes into the dining room sees pictures of HER family and then they start to bleed and she screams and runs into that pinhead guy again. Now the pinhead guy breaks moinques finger so she will deliver the box to ron. Now the police come across the scene and call mr possible while he was about to have sex with his mistress. He calls kim and she comes to the scence and sees the body finds fingerprints sends them to wade he says their her mothers she denies it. The police say the samething she accepts it a starts having a breakdown. Ron visits monique while kims asleep or somethin and monigue says that she had a crush on him and pretty much still likes him he says no cuz hes in love with kim and she remebers the box gives it to him and then he goes back and finds kim trying to leave becuz she fears if they develop a relationship then she will lose ron. He says no he loves her she stays then at the end the have sex. Is that it? I know theres a movie with that pinhead guy in it(probly called "pinhead" or somethin) but ive never seen it. now this story is quite out of the norm of any story ive ever read. (over a 500 at least) What i dont get is why your using th ehorror film characters it lessens the effect of the story becuz when u bring real life characters into a cartoon based story it kind of screws up the feel a little bit. Personally i wouldve just loved this story if u used original character names and personas than to copy the names and characteristics of a horror film. You changed kim and ron into more adult beings as well as all your other characters you did well on that part but u lacked originality from the demons. Maybe im the only one that thinks this way and it could be becuz ive never seen the movie where that pin head guy is in only glanced at the cover of the movie at the video store then gone off to something more comical or tragic. I do wish to congratulate you however on bringing a delightfully new sick twist on the supposed happy childrens show. (im aware it is but there can always be more to the story) The flow of the story goes on however very smoothly.

Sincerely,

Time'sAssasin

This Is GREAT man just GREAT you have to finish this its just so bad arse and Brillent PLZ update soon