| Reviews for Smile on |
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yani chapter 1 . 4/10/2018 these make sad. iruka is so good and wish they could hear thoughts of other. thank you for writing |
TheEndofTag chapter 1 . 8/11/2012 ouch. that hurts! *hugglesIruka* |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2012 Beautiful you captured the emotions of Iruka so well. Look forward to Kakashi pov |
Elliot.S.Roy chapter 1 . 8/17/2011 Elliot: Beautifully written. |
SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 1 . 3/3/2010 A smile to hide the pain... |
LeftMeSpeechless chapter 1 . 8/3/2009 This was one of my very first fanfictions ever. It is still so beautiful and it doesnt matter that I read it about ten times now, I still almost cry. I really have a thing for sad stories and this short masterpiece is one of my absolute favourites. Together with "Live on" it is just... pleasure... |
Ash Navan chapter 1 . 2/25/2009 very well written, gives a strong feeling of knowing Iruka's innermost thoughts and of almost being him. Can't wait for the kakashi POV! You have to do one! |
hA-UkA chapter 1 . 7/19/2008 Realistic. |
Kiterie chapter 1 . 1/20/2008 It definitely gets your attention right from the start, sad though. I'm curious to see what Kakashi's view is. Although I think Iruka's a bit older when Mizuki betrayed the village. |
Mya chapter 1 . 10/22/2007 Oh my god, this is so beautiful, I would like to cry. (Just reminds me of my relation to my boyfriend) It was full with the strong feelings I use to have. Little angsty mayby, but so damn beautiful! (And your english is perfect too) |
shattered-words chapter 1 . 8/23/2006 That was something. It was enjoyable though. Also, I tried emailing you but apparently the email you gave on your stories is incorrect? It's strange but hopefully it's just me. When I email: carcinya , I get a failure notification and that the email sent failed to send. Strange. Anyway, cheers on your fanfic here. |
happychica chapter 1 . 5/20/2006 yeah for sequels! but is this story gonna end happy or sad?... guess I'll just have to go find out! :P |
Kokis chapter 1 . 4/18/2006 wonderful! this one as well as the companion fic. this review goes for both. Please let them be together! Please! it's just too sad! |
Constructor chapter 1 . 4/12/2006 nice and short |
Kloudy Reignfall chapter 1 . 2/23/2006 Aw. Poor sad little Iruka. And what's more sad is that this is so real. I mean, this little problem of his. Happens in 'real life' far too often. Y'know? Ugh. Am I making sense? Damn. Must be getting late. The ability to articulate is completely failing me. T_T As much as I'm loving your stories, I might have to get to the rest of them tomorrow. *wilts* 'Til next time. -Kloudy Reignfall |