Reviews for Smile on
yani chapter 1 . 4/10/2018
these make sad. iruka is so good and wish they could hear thoughts of other. thank you for writing
TheEndofTag chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
ouch. that hurts! *hugglesIruka*
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
Beautiful you captured the emotions of Iruka so well. Look forward to Kakashi pov
Elliot.S.Roy chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Elliot: Beautifully written.
SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
A smile to hide the pain...
LeftMeSpeechless chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
This was one of my very first fanfictions ever. It is still so beautiful and it doesnt matter that I read it about ten times now, I still almost cry.

I really have a thing for sad stories and this short masterpiece is one of my absolute favourites. Together with "Live on" it is just... pleasure...
Ash Navan chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
very well written, gives a strong feeling of knowing Iruka's innermost thoughts and of almost being him.

Can't wait for the kakashi POV! You have to do one!
hA-UkA chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
Realistic.
Kiterie chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
It definitely gets your attention right from the start, sad though. I'm curious to see what Kakashi's view is.

Although I think Iruka's a bit older when Mizuki betrayed the village.
Mya chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Oh my god, this is so beautiful, I would like to cry.

(Just reminds me of my relation to my boyfriend)

It was full with the strong feelings I use to have.

Little angsty mayby, but so damn beautiful!

(And your english is perfect too)
shattered-words chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
That was something. It was enjoyable though. Also, I tried emailing you but apparently the email you gave on your stories is incorrect? It's strange but hopefully it's just me. When I email: carcinya , I get a failure notification and that the email sent failed to send. Strange. Anyway, cheers on your fanfic here.
happychica chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
yeah for sequels! but is this story gonna end happy or sad?... guess I'll just have to go find out!

:P
Kokis chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
wonderful! this one as well as the companion fic. this review goes for both.

Please let them be together! Please!

it's just too sad!
Constructor chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
nice and short
Kloudy Reignfall chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Aw. Poor sad little Iruka. And what's more sad is that this is so real. I mean, this little problem of his. Happens in 'real life' far too often. Y'know? Ugh. Am I making sense? Damn. Must be getting late. The ability to articulate is completely failing me. T_T

As much as I'm loving your stories, I might have to get to the rest of them tomorrow. *wilts*

'Til next time.

-Kloudy Reignfall
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