I really like your story! It’s brilliant! I read it in 4~ days between my work lunch hours and bed.

I know it’s extremely unlikely as it’s been 12 years, any chance of an ending? Either way, I can see somewhat of the direction so at lease there was a reveal.
I really liked it, Thank you!

Yay Willy for telling them!

Go Willy go!

And this chapter too. ️

You need your rest Willy. ️

Every time I read this chapter I love it.

Dreams and love (for a chocolate factory) can keep you going.

What about the Factory Christmas Eve Concert and Dance? What about Bob Miller? What about Willy and Charlie presents? I love this fanfiction.

I come back to this fic maybe once a year since I found it. I really love the story you crafted and the characterisation of everyone. Thank you for this :)

please write more when you can be. thank you

Almost a year later I rerererereread this story! I still love it. I’m never too old for it. I wish I could print and bind this whole thing and carry it with me!

Absolutely amazing story! I’ve spent the past few days reading it and though I’d like to read more, I don’t feel cheated like I normally do on an unfinished story that I’ve invested myself in. The characterization was brilliant and the writing style was beautiful. I especially loved the added character of the Oompa Loompas and their society. If you ever get around to writing more of this I will be one of the first ones reading it, but if you don’t, I still want to thank you for this amazing story. You did wonderful work.

I love this story so much please update as soon as you can. pretty please with a chocolate factory on top!

how did he do the reheating of the soup with only his hands?

Two years later and I've come back to this story, even as I thought I was no longer interested in the franchise. It's made the last few days wonderful. It's a lovely and wonderfully written story. Whenever I read it I have so many different feelings, and I'm back in that fantasy. Thank you for writing this story!