| Reviews for 10 Leisurely Days |
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Guest chapter 6 . 7/18/2018 Im confused on what the plan is but i like it |
CookieNinja77 chapter 12 . 6/26/2018 I started freaking out after reading the "Next Chapter Preview." THE BEACH OMG YAS THE BEACH EEEEEEEEEEEEEE! XD It's the fangirl in me. |
CookieNinja chapter 8 . 6/26/2018 OOC means "Out of Character" and OOCA means "Out of Character Actions". At least that's what I've picked up. |
abandonedaccount47 chapter 8 . 2/21/2017 I like the resurfacing of Katheryn haha, it was pretty funny! Also love Control Freak, and am offended on behalf of Slade, he's one of my favorite villains! |
abandonedaccount47 chapter 3 . 2/20/2017 My guess is that Raven brought the blanket. Cute scene, loved Mad Mod. |
timce2 chapter 22 . 8/5/2016 this is a really beautiful story it is sad that you dont write on fanficton anymore this is with no doubt one of the best story's i have read. |
Yuyui Hime chapter 13 . 4/16/2015 Is it me or are Raven and Beast Boy one of the most adorable pair ever! (besides my OTP of Starfire and Robin or course) |
Yuyui Hime chapter 12 . 4/16/2015 I really love how you choose your words in this story. It's so descriptive and I can vividly see everything that's happening in the story! Love it! Good job! |
Yuyui Hime chapter 8 . 4/16/2015 This chapter is so bittersweet UvU |
Yuyui Hime chapter 5 . 4/16/2015 Such adorable chapter! I'm eager to read it till the end! |
Yuyui Hime chapter 2 . 4/16/2015 This story is getting better and better. Hope it won't crush this small heart of mine T_T |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/23/2015 You finished this story ten flippin' years ago... And ai doubt this will ever be read... But this story rocks pretty good, man. Well written, realistic, dynamic, and I've only read two chapters. Keeps it up. |
Ariel Brown chapter 22 . 8/16/2014 I thought that this fanfiction as a whole was fantastic! I personally believe that this could have been a 3-5 part finale to end off the Teen Titans series in 2005-2006. Honestly, I came because I saw the fanfiction picture of Raven in the dress at the beach, and I read that chapter all the way to the end because I am really into the BBxRae relationship, as many other Teen Titans fans/supporters! Anyway, what I really liked most was how you progressed BBxRae's relationship at the near end of this fanfiction(I hope you can make more pictures of them involving this fanfiction) and how RobxStar's relationship got more and more interesting, what with the plot, the conflict, the turning point, and the climax. Even though this was done in 2005, you have really done a very fantastic job and I hope that you will make another story like you said in the "Next Story Preview". This deserves a 20/10 at best for the hard work and effort that you've put in! |
P.Star chapter 22 . 6/16/2014 WOW! I thought my faith in fanfic had died when I stumbled onto this story, I literally spent the past two days reading your story, almost didn't finish because I thought my heart would be shattered by a huge "Love you but farewell" scene, my god, you were amazing! Your choice of word, your pacing, your description, the entire story was, pardon my french F*CKING amazing! A true piece of work on the site, you should feel incredibly proud of yourself! |
MindGeek chapter 15 . 1/6/2014 I am really liking the story so far. Its still beautifully written as well. I like how you're taking time to develop Robin and Starfire's relationship too. And I can picture everything really well. It looks exactly like how they interacted in different episodes And the Trouble in Tokyo movie. I'm also glad you have a little BB&Rae in here too. That part totally makes my day. They are still just ad awkward, just as hostile, yet somehow are realizing/ showing their feelings for each other as well. I really look forward to seeing what you plan to do with Grey. I like him. He is dark, mysterious, and very similar to Slade, who is probably my favorite, or tied for my favorite, Teen Titan villain. But he seems darker than Slade too. I've always felt comfortable in the dark, felt at home. Which is probably why I'm really strongly draw to Raven. Even though my personality is pretty much a twin of Beast Boy's. I'm also excited to see what you do with Slade... and Red X. Red X is probably my other favorite Teen Titans villain. I could hear everything you wrote for him exactly as he would say it in the show. I'm glad you out them in. Keep it up! |