Thought he was shot in the back not the chest

You should really finish this. I really hope it's a happy ending. I deny Kate died in Twilight and I say she's still on the team and she never died and she married Tony.

augh what's she got to tell him?!

Oh, please have them figure it out and be together in the end! I so wanted this to happen in the show!

about time those two figured it out, had to take a coma to do it

You know it would suck to be shot but I wouldn't mind if kate gave me mouth to mouth.

Just a couple pieces of constructive critism, you do not spell who "hu". It felt that most of these chapters could of been combined, what was used really broke up the story line. I personally enjoyed the film-script like dialouge, then you stopped using it. Also make sure that their actions are not part of their dialouge. It was a touching story, just with some minor fixings. Please keep up the good work!

Hope you update soon, its a good story

Hey, great chapter, keep up the good work, can't wait to read more of this.

good story. chapters are a little short and it hasn't been updated lately but it is a good story. hope you update soon

wow! i'm so happy you updated! loved it- ver touchy

Please continue this!

GO KATE GO!

tnx for updating and letting tony live!

:D Great to see an update. Like your story but could you possibly make the chapters a bit longer... they seem a little too short to be actual chapters... Other than that great job. :)