Reviews for The Person I Admire
Bluewarrior3 chapter 8 . 2/27
Ehh im sorry but rock music? Arent they like in a time where they dont even have cell phones?. Your story isnt bad but there are just parts where i didnt like so much. Thank u for the story..
Bluewarrior3 chapter 6 . 2/26
Im still reading your story and its going good so far. Tho some of the little fights naruto and hinata have are pretty quick . Like in the forest of death and the first exam fight. And when hinata confessed it wasnt as emotional as i thought it would be, maybe because i would assume There's an instructor for a reason, to stop the fight when it goes to far, i guess thats why? I think when you compare this to when she confessed in the "pain arc episode" you just cant compare them..anyways im still reading. By the way cute naruhina moments
*side note* Just letting you know i hope it doesnt seem like im bashing on your story.
Mason Oury chapter 1 . 7/21/2019
Was "Tree House" referring to Takigakure? I remember that Taki, I at least in the anime, has a giant tree that the actual village is built on/in, I think.
wildcatwit chapter 28 . 6/3/2019
Ddduuudddeee! I need you to finish this lol I literally finished the story in two days and I am emotionally invested at this point lol
QueenDeadPool chapter 28 . 9/30/2018
I really liked this, great story, I just wish there was more.
Kingkong101 chapter 12 . 9/8/2018
It sucks
KATON BOSS chapter 1 . 6/8/2018
Please continue this story cause it's awesome
Noonzakai317 chapter 28 . 5/23/2017
So, I have been following this story for, well, most of its online life. I thoroughly enjoy coming across one that I hadn't read in years and find myself still loving every chapter. I hope it picks up soon. This good of a story deserves a fantastic ending.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2017
Awesome story. Please do more
Chef 101 chapter 28 . 11/27/2016
The amount of thought and effort you have put into this story astounds me! Awesome job and I can't wait for more! :)
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 6/10/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
Ahyah chapter 28 . 5/27/2016
this was an interestingly good read. A damn pity that it wasn't finished.
TheSlySage chapter 28 . 4/12/2016
Should you decide to continue this story I will very thankful it was turning into one of my favorites either way thank you for writing what you have I loved it hope you revisit it one day!
guest chapter 27 . 2/21/2016
SakuLee is pathetic. Kill yourself, virgin loser.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/2/2015
I know yoh worked hard on this and i want to say thanks there are only a few writters who will take a story this far.

But i will not be finishing it i gave it a try read up to chapter 5 but it just was not for me.

Everybody has their likes and dislikes, but this was a good story.

Good job :)
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