I really like this story!

cute. very cute.

Awesome story! Keep up the good work!

~Amayachida

nice story _

This story is AMAZING!

i really liked it. I really like the idea of her meeting with her parents in america and the police there wanting to capture them and adn i don't know what to say it's just unbeleivable how you maneged to write such a beautiful story it's rare to find a story like this with the romance but at the same time the action. and they where also in charactor i love you Satashi! Keep up the good work you are the BEST! ANd don't ever stop writing!

~*lunarwing*~

Hey, i know i left a review on the 4th chapter, but i was wondering something. i really like your idea of how chiaki's mana and stuff works. like instead of a shield he just heals really fast.

may i use that principle in my fanfic?

thanks for ur time

-Bea

I find this story really really really really (etc) good! A well done job! Finally a longer KKJ story well written! I was kinda depressed by other promising (turning out to be bad) fiction in the KKJ fandom. Though there are some mistakes I believe, but it didn't really matter that much. I don't really like the ending, however, because the same as Chiaki pointed out - and it was a little abrupt, suddenly God tells the angels to reveal themselves to humans, though normal humans can't see them as long as they aren't obsessed, etc. I guess you were sorta hasty in ending the story... nah, still good enough thanks for making my day!

mfg

Lolchen

oh man, i love this fic! it was very well written, like the twist w/ tyrone and how maron's parents can around in the end. love he chekmate sequecne at the end.

and i absolutely adored the drama and bit o f angst that u had going on with sinbad getting injured, losing his tranformation getting found out etc! i like the explaination of the mana btw. if u don't mind i'm probably going to use the 'so exhausted that my neshin fades and i get caught' plotlet in one of my future fics. if u don't want me to, i'll not, but hopefully u'll take it as a complement and i'll certainly put in the AN where i got the idea!

i'll stop talking ur poor ear off now

ja ne!

yay jjk fanfic

Woohoo! OK, LOVED that one, too. You should write more KKJ fics. What other manga/anime do you write for? I'd love to read them! (If I'm farmilliar with it...) _ However, one critique: Maron/Jeanne needs to get in more danger and fight back harder. She's a bit spacey at times. Chiaki/Sinbad can't have all the fun, can he? _ And it's much more fun to rescue a damsel if she's actually in destress. Ne? _

Ja-ne! _-

YOU ARE SO SMARTY WARTY! SU!

YOU ARE LIKE MY TWIN OR SOMETHING!

WELL I GUESS ITS SAFE TO SAY THAT BRILLANT MINDS THINK ALIKE!

THAT WAS A PERFECT STORY! NO FLAWS WHATSOEVER!

only it could have been better if her parents moved in the apartment next to Chiaki's so, Chiaki could have more 'private' time with Maron. :D i perverted

LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!

YOU, MY FRIEND, HAVE A TALENT FOR WRITING VERY SUSPENSFUL STORIES! AND I AM NOT TYPING IN UPPER-CASE FOR MY HEALTH! YOU ARE A PURE GENUIS! :3

OH MY GOD! SU!

THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED! SO KWEL! I TOTALLY WOTALLY LOVED IT!

MORE, MORE, MORE, MOREY, MORE! SU!

Wow.

“He has such a cute butt.”?

THUMP!

bunny secratary: Misha12 is unconcious yet again, but she says good job and read New Generation! :3

Loved thw whole story! It was so cute I loed it! I hope that you will continue to keep writing more.

I love the story line so far its so cute!Keep writting,

ps I love all your other stories of Kamikaze kaitou Jeanne