Their *anniversary*? Typical Maureen...

Still, good. The dialogue flows, and it sounds like real people talking. You've got a good relationship for them without being one of those hard-core M&M shippers, which I like. I loved the last line. I'm not sure Mark uses that much profanity, but how he responds to this kind of pressure is really anyone's guess. Quality stuff!

Nice. Very true to characters, for the most part. Woo for you!

Ouch! That was harsh. But I love it.

Oh, it was their anniversary...poor Marky.