Very nice story 3

THIS IS SO AMAZING I LOVE YOUR WRITING AND PORTRAIL OF THE CHARACTERS GOSH

Scar in this chapter reminds me a lot of Parental Roy. :) Except maybe more like an older brother than a father.

I LOVE this! I know life is busy and you are working on other things, but you should TOTALLY finish this story! Please? I love it a lot. I really like Scar, he's one of my favorite characters to watch change and grow. I really like his relationship with the Elrics in this story, even though it doesn't quite mesh with everything cannon. It's still great. Thank you for it so far! You should totally finish it though! It is definitely worth being written. :)

A Grat Story I hope you can go on with it.
Sorry my english is Not really good

Eine tolle Geschichte, ich hoffe das du irgendwann weiter schreiben kannst.
Grüße

sigh, another dead great story:(

When will you up data? Every time I see it's still at 11 chapters a little part of me dies inside.
;-;
Please, please update.

Lol they barely survived a routine inspection

Lol mustang gang

This is a really great story, I liked the one before it as well :) I just forgot to reveiw.

You are utterly awesome. I love this story. Thanks for sharing!

Oh ,yeah, collage...This first month of summer vacation I read more books than the whole first year in university!

*sob sob* D:

WHAT WAS THE REASON! *cough* Sorry. I just thought it was amazing, and I can't believe you've written no more...

Who pulled Scar away? Who moved Al? Have Ed absorbed anthing of the liquid like Scar? If he hasn't, is it because he doesn't have the tattoo? Is Scar's situation like Hoho's in the manga, has he souls inside him now?

And the ending was adorable!

"Until next chapter! -waves-" - ... ;_;

Bye... T_T

Eee! It's Greed's chimeras! YEY! I didn't know/remember that they were "created" in the fifth lab, too!

*lack of comments means I'm absorbed by the exciting development*

Oh, I feel soooo incredibly stupid! I was woundering was EXACTLY those blasted guards did to Scar, and were they got a philosopher's stone from, when they were acctually just using A stone! (Still not sure how they had the knowledge of basic human transmutation...Ok, one of them at least...)

This whole thing makes more sense then I remember the actual anime doing. Why was Ed attempting to make a Stone in the anime again? Nina?

Next chapter is the last chapter you wrote... D:

*grunt* Tucker...

I wounder why the bloodseals are at almost the same place on Al, Slicer and Barry...They have no imagination...(No way I'm gonna blame Arakawa...)

God, Barry is so mean. Although, I guess that's not it; he didn't do it to be mean, I guess...It was just a way to distract Alphonse...

*cheers lke a maniac!* I love Scar!

Oh, God, this is so exciting! It's like FMA all over again, but diffrent, and you don't know exactly what's going to happen! I love it that the Slicer Brothers acctually got the time to explain what happened in the lab this time. Is it because Scar was keeping Lust and Gluttony occupied? (OR, it happened exactly like this in the first anime, I have NO idea, I can't remember anything...)

Well, I'm confused out of my mind. Well, not really, but it's not exactly crystall-clear either...Wsa Tucker there? Was Scar there?

Lol, Envy's not very good at this! Ross' mole and now Scar's bruise! And congratulations, I didn't even think of Envy! I thought Scar was gonna give Ed a wink or hint or something and he didn't and I was sad!

Ah, palm tree!

Creepy place...

Oh, no God, don't kill Darius!

Oh, haha!, it was Gluttony...

So that was the Führer's plan all along(?). What made him think that Ed would to that if Scar asked him/forced? Well the obvious answer would be that he knew that Ed and Scar knew eachother and were friends already, but why use SCAR? Hmm...

You really did the necessary changes gloriously well!