Those two actually did wind up getting together in the books that take place after Season Five. Heck Torran even calls John Daddy (Or was it Papa and Kanaan was Daddy? Hmm, eh, unimportant.) Anyway, now that that little tidbit that had been bothering me since the last scene is dealt with, I have to say that I really liked not only this story but the others I've read so far and am looking forward to the rest that I read in the upcoming days.

Wow, I loved this please expand this story. This could have been written by the SGA writers, its that good and authentic.

Jealous Shep always makes for a great story...Extremely well written...

Wow, that was really excellent. I don't usually read romance or shipper stories as they are usually so full of character assasination but yours had the characters spot on. You may have even converted me into routing for a Sheppard/Teyla romance.

This was excellent. Beautifully written, the pacing was perfect and your characterizations were spot-on. What is especially enjoyable about your writing is that you take your time in setting a scene, drawing out each character's emotions and inner turmoils, which gives the story wonderful depth and maturity. It was also very welcome to read an introspection on the repercussions of the kiss in Conversion, and the very obvious attraction Teyla and Ronon share. Wonderful job and keep up the writing. Looking forward to many more stories from you!

good, well done, that is how i imagine it would be written if it was on the show

Great story! It was well written and the kind of thing the directors should be putting in! The characters were realistic and it was a good plot as well as a sweet promise of romance!

This is the best John/Teyla as a possible couple characterization that I've read so far. You managed to show that they're attracted to each other without stripping away their personalities. Keep up the good work.

Excellent! Absolutely excellent! The tension was great and the writing was even better.

this was really good! would you consider keeping it going? you could explore how they would work out with their 'new' level of friendship and stuff!

excellent work!

Very sweet, I really like it, and I'm not even much of a Sheyla shipper. Good work! :D

You must keep writing here...There just aren't enough Teyla and John fanfics...and you are certainly very good at this...at least from this reader...

One of THE best J/T stories out there. Thanks for this!

excellent missing scene and it so works in the little world of Sheyla.

Great job, though I really wish the show spent far more time than it does with the John/Teyla interaction. I really liked this story and it does make sense (well, sort of) as another missing scene for SHEYLA fans everywhere, write more.