It's has too much suspense moments... Hah..hah..hah.. Not too good for my already weak heart. ;P Hee, I can't wait for more.

I'm quiet enjoying this story, and I know it has been years since you updated, but I thought I might ask you for an update anyways.

UPDATE BITCH!

OMG! This is awesome plz continue it T.T poor Kenren already lost his love again tch i would slap that crazy guy in the face lol plz update soon

write more please its so good

pouts untill update is written :(

write more this is great:)

Update, Update! LOL I love this story and it's prequel. I really hope you'll find some time to complete this. I'd love to know what's going to happen. Such a WONDERFUL story!

Is there going to be an update for this soon? It's a bit hanging...hahaha. I do hope you're finished running and hiding because an update would be wonderful. :)

OMG! This story is brilliant.

I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Thanks!

I am so glad you are continuing this story. I was wondering how you were going to have Konzen distinguish Goku but of course, it's Goku's name! I'm looking forward to the interesting twist you've set up with Ni and Tenpou. Would we get to see a verbal spar btwn those two?

Yay, an update! (_) But you're so mean, leaving us all with another cliffhanger! (.

HI GUYS! im kind of a noob when it comes to saiyuki fanfics and im seeing all these numbers like 85 535 39 lol and i dont know WHAT IT MEANS! can someone be kind enough to write like what these numbers mean? lol i havent gotten around to finishing this fic yet but so far it seems good! ill repost later with more comments on this authors actual work! :)

I feel the need to point out that between when Goku responds to Konzen and the end of the battle you have a slight problem with your description of what's going on being essentially non-existant.

You say that one of the Itan children started rushing blindly at Konzen; Kenren somehow concludes that it's Goku, despite the fact that your description of his behavior seems more indicative of something that could be misinterpreted as an attack on Konzen. And then apparently he's attacking the copies, although you never actually say so, except to say that he "turned against" them. And then you didn't really explain what happened to the copies; the last thing we hear they "panicked" - you never say (in that part) if the battle ended with the copies fleeing or dead.

Sure, we can make a lot of assumptions based on what you _did_ say, but we really shouldn't _have to_.

I really, really, _really_ hate to have to give you a review like this, because I love this story arc, but it's against my policy to ignore something like this.

OMG OMG OM GOM GOM OMG! Remember me? I'm still threating you if you don't update, because you are pure EVIL!

I love this fic so so so much and it touched something inside of me when I saw a new chapter update.

AND AND OMG! TENPOU! *secretly likes n/c Tenpou fics*

UPDATE!

Gah, why'd you have to leave it at such a big cliffhanger? (TT_TT) I love this story so far (as well as this story's prequel), and I think that you're doing an amazing job with keeping all of the characters IC. Please update soon! (_)