You need a beta to clean up your spelling, other than that, it's a good story
Rock on

Hello,
not again I thought you were still writing it!
I hope you are not still sick.
Good luck with all you do, Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeas writ more.

Hello,
Great story keep writing you have a neck for it.
I think I have read this story before, it is so good I'll just keep re- reading it.

Hello,

I'm such a H&G fan thanks for writing it as such. I've got to go read more.
Good luck with all you do.
Miss Millie

Excellent story! Please get a beta reader to correct the spelling. Like the Sorting Hat told Harry, "you could be great, you know..."
Rock on

There are spelling and grammar errors, but this is a dang good start and more original than most I've read. I shall continue on.
Rock on

Why isn't this continued? *pouts* why? Anyways I LOVE the plot! Good idea! I'm tired so I can't really tipe.
Love,
Maraduers_for_ever

Update?

I loved reading the chapters very much.

you haven't updated this since 2006 are you ever going to ? i mean its 2014 going to be 2015 real soon so ?
at least just post a chapter that summaries all that would happen .

What the fudgeballs? Hermione is Sirius' son? But-but James had no sister, only chil-oops, I forgot you said this was an alternate universe... Never-mind.

Great job, the ending seemed a bit abrupt and rushed to me though. I was looking forward to the ball in detail. Anyway, UPDATE SOON!

I wonder about reveiwing storys like this. I mean the chapters Iam reading are not the current ones. And to type (2 fingered) takes so much time, time better spent reading what comes next

Ah, Hermione. The Pureblooded Muggleborn.

China. He has family in China.