Reviews for Nature Unleashed
Dezcon chapter 9 . 7/7
There are so many different pov's it's actually making it hard to follow when you switch back and forth between them all in one chapter. I think it might have been better if you put all the different pov's into an interlude or two instead and focused on Xander's pov in the regular chapters. I have more complaints but those are basically just repeating what others before me have already commented so I won't repeat that.

I do like the story tho. Thanks for the chapters.
LuluViBritania chapter 2 . 12/29/2019
first the title then getting his powers from Gaia and still he is just a Hulk Xander? seeriously? from those two i was expecting Hashirama levels of Wood/plant manipulation instead we get a knockoff Hulk since unlike Banner Xander has little to no use outside his Hulk form, the only thing i see making this story differant is either Xander eventually gets full control of hulk form or he also has the Wood/Plant manipulation to go with it
ballinore chapter 13 . 10/26/2019
Using soldier boy for the hulk's mind upgrade was a nice trick. A much more balanced mind, but not really complete or independent enough to be a problem. And the story ended without romance? I'm totally okay with that. While it's a big part of the human experience, it's not everything and can almost be a relief to read a story without that focus sometimes. Plus, not to be overly crass, but he's teamed up with two strippers and saw Wonder Woman's boob. I don't think Xander will be devoid of joy in his life.

My only complaint is that I was occassionally confused by strength comparisons. Glory was as strong as the Hulk. Alright, as basically the strongest of their respective universes, I can accept that. But then Miss Martian had as much raw strength as Glory, maybe 10% less. So Miss Martian is as strong as the Hulk? That's where things break down for me. And it was frequently remarked that Hulk had much strength but little skill. Absolutely true. It was also repeatedly mentioned that anyone with even a little skill could run rings around him. Not true. Whether it's Grifter or Deadshot, they'd be stuck in a slowly deteriorating battle of attrition. Where they can't really hurt Hulk, and slowly lose gear and strength as he gets stronger and faster. You need either exceptional skill and some very good tricks (AKA Batman), or a combination of good skills and great strength (Superman, Wonder Woman) to do more than stretch things out against him.

Well, that's my opinion anyway. Power level and who's stronger arguments aside, this was a great read. I had fun, and was sad to see it end. But happy it had an ending? Thanks for sharing!
ballinore chapter 8 . 10/25/2019
Wow, Willow is going to attack the Justice League? On her own? Crazy little over-achieving redheads. And didn't Odin say he was sending Thor to help stabilize things? While he wields great power and is of good character, I don't think I've ever seen Thor as a stabilizing force. The All-Father might be disappointed.

And finally, thank you. Thank you for making some sense of why Hulk is so dim. Yes, his intelligence varies by comic and writer, along with his power, but it never quite fit with the mystical aspects. If he's just a result of radiation and experiments gone wrong, then sure, he can be simple-minded. His entire existence is a giant unintended side-effect, so there really ought to be some big downsides and he should just be grateful that his skin isn't peeling off daily. But when he is the Chosen of Gaea, or Gaea's Rage or any other mystic name, then the levels of dumbness just don't fit. Unless we get an ancient tale like this one. So thank you.
ballinore chapter 7 . 10/25/2019
It's always sad to realize that Supergirl won't be a romantic option, but she seems pretty unlikely here. Your crossing of comic companies has been keeping me guessing. Will there be a SHIELD? What would even be the point with the JLA in orbit? Or would it be less of a superhero support and supervillan opposition group, and more of a government attempt of appearing to have control they've lost? Questions like these keep popping up, because I have no idea what characters or groups you'll bring in next.

I've been enjoying the read, and will certainly keep doing so. Thanks for posting!
vmage2 chapter 13 . 9/9/2019
Does this have a sequel yet?
vmage2 chapter 13 . 9/9/2019
Solider Boy should be Soldier Boy.
Beowolfalien chapter 8 . 7/18/2017
I love your adaptions of the superheroes from Marvel so far.
Beast Mode92 chapter 1 . 4/3/2017
This was a great sander story. I really like your sander marvel/dc stories
Umbra.Venator chapter 13 . 5/9/2016
Awesome story :)
duskrider chapter 13 . 6/3/2015
Nice job
shugokage chapter 13 . 1/31/2015
Great job on this interesting story!
BinarySobriquet chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
The emotion displayed on his face was complete, all consuming RAGE! Logic shattered into a million pieces as the big green brute decided to act in a way completely antithetical to the emotion of RAGE. Instead of assaulting the object of his RAGE, he chose to do the exact opposite of RAGE and ran away.

Despite being heavily reinforced by countless, painfully verbose paragraphs, he effortless smashed his way out of the room. Voluntary suspension of disbelief was left behind in the wreckage, obviously strained well past the breaking point.
The Sinful chapter 7 . 6/1/2014
Megan with a favorite shade of green? And as a "twin" of a character that didn't have a twin? More like M'gann
Navn Ukjent chapter 7 . 5/16/2014
Some fun stuff so far, but there is also some things that not logical. Why would they need to use a camera when Void is present. She is an AI, and everything she sees and hears is naturally stored in her memory. It should be easy to copy out some video of the senator.

It's also not very smart to send out Xander on this hunt when they KNOW he isn't in control of Hulk AND that he is wanted by several powerful enemies.
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