What the...

Aww. So beautiful. I have no other words

i loved the writting in this. precise yet blurry. i loved it. it's funny because i never read a story where Jess crashes Rory's wdding and object... nicely done :)

Really amazing, perfectly written!

Warm. Passionate. Perfect.

It was good, but I had a hard time understanding what was going on, I understand that someone objected and that it was a wedding. But, the time and... I'm so confused I don't know how to explain my confusion!

Wow! I loved it!

amazing. truly amazing. again, u have me hooked to another one of your stories. i have read all of your gilmore girls fanfic and i can say that they just get better and better and i can actually feel the emotions going on in the stories and i love it! another great one-parter!

Gorgeous.

Beautiful. That's the only word that's coming to mind right now. The imagery was fantastic. The colors. Just, perfect.

wow...this was...wow. Amazing.

Well done.

Good short story, full of feelings, and color. enough words to feel the passion, but didn't play with the whys of

it all...some things you just want to view, and this fic was one of them...THANKS!

wow

ok, I didn't get all of it

who was rory marrying? jess or someone else?

I like this sentence-"teeth meet the innocent skin of botton lip" realy... lyrical

loved it

me

Beautifully scripted.

Very poetic. I like poetry. :) I guess it's good cause you never really said who it was... so people can interpret it how they want, but we all know Rory SHOULD BE with Jess. ;) lol. Great Writing!