You seem to have an affinity for animal characters. Stories like this could possibly work for a mini-series or a short film.

What was/is the inspiration behind such stories, if I may ask?

Kinda sad, but...

Good!

OMC!this was so frikin good!I wish I could be this good a writer...*sighs*But I hope you write more cuz this was so good

One word. Fantastic. Litrally, that is a good chapter. Write more? Poor Amga and Atnar. I see you have changed the story, changed the names. But yeh, good story. :)

great story! i like the ending! i'm more for sad endings, but this could be considered happy because is Amga went back with Hail the poor puppies would have been killed after birth and...ya...Amga would be very sad...

i would've liked that ending too, but i like ur ending better.

OMG i adored that story. That was really good. I hope you are planning to write more stories for the Sight because that was brilliant. The Sight is my favourite book ever and this is my favoutite story in this category so far. Well done that was really good.

Kind of Depressing, but I like it. You got it from The Sight, didn't you? I love that book.

this is an intresting idea. i like it a lot. a lot a lot. i'm not sure whether i like Hail or hate him. he seems like such a jerk, but a really cool jerk all the same. did you make up Varg's or not? they're sweet! i love 'em!

Great story (although, I must admit, I'm usually partial to happier endings...).

An insane leader, tragic love...

Beautiful!

Of course, I'm left with one question...

How does a crow smirk?

*Howls* No! That is not the end! That cannot be the end! By tor, you have to write more!