Great Story! Enough for me to read right through the whole thing. It's interesting, different, and original which captures the readers attention instantly. I fell in love with the first chapter, it was very captivating, unexpected, and left the reader guessing and wondering. I loved all the elements and devices you used.

I'm not sure if you want any constructive critisim because not many people take it gracefully, but it you would like some just let me know.

This story is amazing! You have too continue it.

I love the story so far,I'm going to be honest, This is one of those stories that makes me want to cry and It's not easy for me to cry. I can't wait to read more. Hope to read it soon.

Excellent and magnificent story and chappies i love it and enjoy it! I look forward to the continuation of this fix also good pick with the reviews and happy writing )!

~himeko63

I like the story so far it's really good. I cant wait to read more.

This is great! Do continue with it

You need to update the suspense is killing me X3 Soon!

You should so start to continue this again.

NejiSakura? Now THAT's an interesting pairing. Not that it's bad or anything. It's just ... odd.

wah! poor ten-ten! why did she have to die im soo confused whats up with sakura? please continue soon!

This is really good! Update again, pwease?

Lurve, Sorrelstar

I luv this fic! I read it a few months ago, but forgot about it and forgot to review or post it up in my favorites list. I only bookmarked it because I wasn't a member at the time. Anyways, nice job, heheh, the memories the the chapters in this fic are starting to come back

Keep up the awsome work!

.::kristen::.

this was such a dark story, i loved it, the setting of words were truly wonderful! and the plot is great! everything falls into place! tyvm update soon really looking forward to it

TG

that was so sad... but so good!

...now i feel bad for cursing naruto... i'll read more tomorrow dude. its late... great story by the way '